|Reviews for FiftyEight Nights|
| Sorceress Jade chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I just love the mental image of Edward hiding in her closet. It's so undignified. I really loved the line about him hurting the man she loves, and their little exchange right in there. This was excellent of course. Thanx for updating, I was just thinking about you today. It was like you granted an unspoken wish.
| Luckycat3 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Heh. This is really cute. Lots of fluff, but enough drama to keep it from being too sugar-sweet. It's very in character, and the writing style is very SMish. Great job! :D
| girlpower8900 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
This is good
| karenaf92 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
i absolutely love this :D
| Browneyedbella347 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
This story is love. I stalk it. Just a little :)
| dkanp chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I love this! You are a terrific writer!
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
aha... loved the bantering and the serious conversation..especially Edward's exasperation with her.. very Edward and Bella!
I love how Bella seems to be more aware of and in-tune with Edward's feelings here..
| NoMoreThanUsual chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Another amazing chapter, Eowyn. Very very insightful. And I love how you've woven fluff and angst together here. It's a very real and very powerful piece. As always A. :o)
| paper.creations chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Awe! They are definitely made for each other, that's for sure. I'm not sure who else would put up with Edward's black moods and Bella's insecurities :)
Loved it, as usual! I loved the Carlisle and Jasper references. It made her seem more involved with the family.
| tanwellman chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
cute chapter. I love how emo Edward is. It's so cute (which is anti-emo. The irony kills me! haha).
Looking forward to more...
:-) Have a good week.
| Viper003 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Loved it! Really well-written, too! Update soon:)
| left on the altar chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
I just love that line "She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming" and from his viewpoint, so fitting.
Really enjoying this little stroll down the backstory of Edward's thinking. You have some amazing insights! Looking forward to more reading.
| tanwellman chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
To answer your poll...you do not have to respond to reviews, I'd rater you update! :-D
This is a wonderful story. I skipped it yesterday because where you wrote "Alternate POV," I misread it and thought it said, "Alternate ending." So I thought it was another alternate Breaking Dawn. I am glad I went back and re-read your summary. Silly me.
I also thought it was going to be all fluff, and so this most recent chapter took me by surprise. A good (and yet sad) surprise!
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 4 . 1/9/2009
"She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming."
Ah, I love that line - I'm still chortling. I adored this chapter, and it might have been my favourite so far for pure substance. I mean, I love fluff, but this fluff had some real body to it and a proper shape, y'know? I like my fluff this way.
Ew, that almost turned into an innuendo there - joking. I meant it only as a crappy metaphor. :) Haha.
Anyway, this was fantastic. It was so sweet to see Bella comforting Edawrd at the end. He worries too much...
I can't wait for your next chapter - I will keep reading, mark my words!
| MeyaRose chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
Hm... This chapter gave us a new look at things.