Reviews for FiftyEight Nights
shortbutsweetmont4 chapter 5 . 1/13/2009
I am just a sucker for good Edward/Bella stories, and this is definitely one. I LOVE this! Please update soon!
Sorceress Jade chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I just love the mental image of Edward hiding in her closet. It's so undignified. I really loved the line about him hurting the man she loves, and their little exchange right in there. This was excellent of course. Thanx for updating, I was just thinking about you today. It was like you granted an unspoken wish.
Luckycat3 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Heh. This is really cute. Lots of fluff, but enough drama to keep it from being too sugar-sweet. It's very in character, and the writing style is very SMish. Great job! :D
girlpower8900 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
This is good
karenaf92 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
i absolutely love this :D
Browneyedbella347 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
This story is love. I stalk it. Just a little :)
dkanp chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I love this! You are a terrific writer!
ChieriAn9eL chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
aha... loved the bantering and the serious conversation..especially Edward's exasperation with her.. very Edward and Bella!

I love how Bella seems to be more aware of and in-tune with Edward's feelings here..
NoMoreThanUsual chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Another amazing chapter, Eowyn. Very very insightful. And I love how you've woven fluff and angst together here. It's a very real and very powerful piece. As always A. :o)
paper.creations chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Awe! They are definitely made for each other, that's for sure. I'm not sure who else would put up with Edward's black moods and Bella's insecurities :)

Loved it, as usual! I loved the Carlisle and Jasper references. It made her seem more involved with the family.

Update soon!

tanwellman chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
cute chapter. I love how emo Edward is. It's so cute (which is anti-emo. The irony kills me! haha).

Looking forward to more...

:-) Have a good week.
Viper003 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Loved it! Really well-written, too! Update soon:)
left on the altar chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
I just love that line "She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming" and from his viewpoint, so fitting.

Really enjoying this little stroll down the backstory of Edward's thinking. You have some amazing insights! Looking forward to more reading.
tanwellman chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
To answer your do not have to respond to reviews, I'd rater you update! :-D

This is a wonderful story. I skipped it yesterday because where you wrote "Alternate POV," I misread it and thought it said, "Alternate ending." So I thought it was another alternate Breaking Dawn. I am glad I went back and re-read your summary. Silly me.

I also thought it was going to be all fluff, and so this most recent chapter took me by surprise. A good (and yet sad) surprise!

Keep writing!
lemon-of-the-tent chapter 4 . 1/9/2009
"She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming."

Ah, I love that line - I'm still chortling. I adored this chapter, and it might have been my favourite so far for pure substance. I mean, I love fluff, but this fluff had some real body to it and a proper shape, y'know? I like my fluff this way.

Ew, that almost turned into an innuendo there - joking. I meant it only as a crappy metaphor. :) Haha.

Anyway, this was fantastic. It was so sweet to see Bella comforting Edawrd at the end. He worries too much...

I can't wait for your next chapter - I will keep reading, mark my words!



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