|Reviews for FiftyEight Nights|
| Browneyedbella347 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
This story is love. I stalk it. Just a little :)
| dkanp chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I love this! You are a terrific writer!
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
aha... loved the bantering and the serious conversation..especially Edward's exasperation with her.. very Edward and Bella!
I love how Bella seems to be more aware of and in-tune with Edward's feelings here..
| NoMoreThanUsual chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Another amazing chapter, Eowyn. Very very insightful. And I love how you've woven fluff and angst together here. It's a very real and very powerful piece. As always A. :o)
| paper.creations chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Awe! They are definitely made for each other, that's for sure. I'm not sure who else would put up with Edward's black moods and Bella's insecurities :)
Loved it, as usual! I loved the Carlisle and Jasper references. It made her seem more involved with the family.
| tanwellman chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
cute chapter. I love how emo Edward is. It's so cute (which is anti-emo. The irony kills me! haha).
Looking forward to more...
:-) Have a good week.
| Viper003 chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Loved it! Really well-written, too! Update soon:)
| left on the altar chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
I just love that line "She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming" and from his viewpoint, so fitting.
Really enjoying this little stroll down the backstory of Edward's thinking. You have some amazing insights! Looking forward to more reading.
| tanwellman chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
To answer your poll...you do not have to respond to reviews, I'd rater you update! :-D
This is a wonderful story. I skipped it yesterday because where you wrote "Alternate POV," I misread it and thought it said, "Alternate ending." So I thought it was another alternate Breaking Dawn. I am glad I went back and re-read your summary. Silly me.
I also thought it was going to be all fluff, and so this most recent chapter took me by surprise. A good (and yet sad) surprise!
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 4 . 1/9/2009
"She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming."
Ah, I love that line - I'm still chortling. I adored this chapter, and it might have been my favourite so far for pure substance. I mean, I love fluff, but this fluff had some real body to it and a proper shape, y'know? I like my fluff this way.
Ew, that almost turned into an innuendo there - joking. I meant it only as a crappy metaphor. :) Haha.
Anyway, this was fantastic. It was so sweet to see Bella comforting Edawrd at the end. He worries too much...
I can't wait for your next chapter - I will keep reading, mark my words!
| MeyaRose chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
Hm... This chapter gave us a new look at things.
| Maye Faire chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
Suicidal lemming. I love that. :)
| geophf chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
What makes the whole thing worse for him, I suppose, is Bella's complete confidence in their future. Thank goodness I've read BD and things, really, will turn out all right. Maybe I should loan him my copy so he can chill out, just a little bit?
A "relaxed Edward"? Is that phrase a non-sequitur or oxymoronic?
I like the turn this chapter took. Really, I don't think I could have stood 58 chapters of "I love you, smootchy face" marshmellowness. Nor could I stand 58 chapters of "I'm no good for you" angstification. But a little bit of this, a little bit of that, and maybe a little bit of Bella and Edward just enjoying a quiet moment or, you know, having fun. Maybe doing the teen bowling thing for a change?
Oo, Bella and a 12 pound bowling ball. Ouch! Maybe that's not such a good idea. Emmett might actually end up under Carlisle care, busting his gut from laughing so hard.
Am enjoying your story; keep up the good work.
| shortbutsweetmont4 chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
very good, very CUTE edward/bella moment...i feel so bad for edward...
| siruisblack18 chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
I loved this, a very well needed and well written chapter. Loved the the second to last sentence, very funny :)