Reviews for obsesion
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
looking good
LadyElena17 chapter 6 . 9/21/2011
love this story so far! hoping to read more!
Dragz1991 chapter 6 . 12/22/2010
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
too lazy to log in. 3 chapter 6 . 10/31/2010
this story has a lot of potential.

but i've strongly advice a beta.. even in the title, the word 'obsession' is spelt wrong. and the description.. so many errors.

if you corrected them, you would have a lot more readers, for sure.

it's frustrating to read.
Tigger77 chapter 6 . 6/18/2010
Your story is really good! I like it a lot! But, you need to work on capatalizing letters at the beginning of the sentences and the I's. :)
bellac611 chapter 6 . 5/31/2010
okay. the plot is good but i cant stand the short ass chapters and your spelling/punctuation. there is no detail at all. you need to make sure that you use the correct words. For example: the sentence (i no its not relevant to your story its just an example) "The ball is over here." just because "here" and "hear" sound the same doesnt mean that you can replace it lol. sorry if i may seem picky but it aggervated me.
time-twilight chapter 6 . 2/26/2010
update soon
ella chapter 6 . 1/18/2010
hey , i really liked it but the chapters are soo short
arianajoley chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
i knew you would be a horrible writer when you spelled obsession wrong. you need to correct this. you are such a retard
arianajoley chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
i knew you would be a horrible writer when you spelled obsession wrong. you need to correct this. you are such a retard
pixie chixzy chapter 6 . 8/11/2009
sweetness! :D
dustyrose03 chapter 6 . 2/27/2009
poor bella :P

but i wouldn't mind being kidnapped by edward _

update when you can :)

x
Jayleen-Cullen-Whitlock-Hale chapter 6 . 2/13/2009
CAN U MAKE CHAPPIES LONGER PLEASE UPDATE!
Kirby-Chan-X3 chapter 6 . 2/13/2009
um i don't mean to be rude or anything but can u please write normally w/ capital letters and stuff in the sentences and spell correctly.

sorry but sometimes the sentences just end up weird!

but i do LOVE the story!
TriGemini chapter 6 . 2/13/2009
Good chapter!

It figures, that Edward would be the one to stop Bella from escaping from him. After all, Bella doesn't understand why Edward is so obssessed in keeping her with him; even with his explaination to her, she still doesn't understand.

Seeing as how, we all know that Edward is attracted to Bella's blood-but that isn't a reason to keep her with him.

Hopefully, Edward can find a good enough, reason to convince Bella to stay with him; aside from his torment of wanting her blood.

It'll be interesting to find out, what'll happen next.

Looking forward to more. Until then.
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