Reviews for Pain of Loss
she.a.punk chapter 3 . 2/28/2019
I am overwhelmed. What a perfectly lovely story. It was painful, but handled so beautifully. I wanted this, I don't even know why, and I've been looking everywhere. And here it was all the time. Thanks for putting this into the world Nika, and here's to the rest.

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 2 . 2/28/2019
My emotions are all over the place now. I have never felt so conflicted about a fic. You write the anguish, the agony so well. I have never experienced it, thank goodness, but I have thought about it and I can't even let myself go there. But it makes sense, the way she feels, the guilt and responsibility. And him, realizing he lost something he never thought he'd have before he even had a chance to realize he had it. Ugh, so sad. On to the next...

Punk
she.a.punk chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
Oh man...how painful...I fell so sorry for Jen. And for Mel...so sorry for how much I'm already enjoying this...it's kind of sick...

I have been looking for fics like these (I told you I was at a point in my life) especially after I read Nine Months (which I'm planning to go back and reread soon). I'd been thinking there would be more drama at the end of that one because of all the "she's not due for another three weeks". So now that I have this one I can let that go a little bit (although if you'd like to pursue this aspect of their relationship some more let me tell you I am HERE FOR THAT). I'm off to the next, but first, I shall relish in the angst a bit more...

Punk
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5/2017
I lost 3 - first one on Mother's day, 2nd was physically traumatic, 3rd...
rainbowlollipops15 chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
so beautiful...
Maddie chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
Another well written story. The characterizations and emotions are perfect. Ronon and Jennifer, as you write them, are a fascinating couple and fit so well together even when they are struggling to understand their relationship. The show's writers teased us with this relationship, then let it go. One of their many mistakes. I'm just glad there are talented (much more talented) fan writers who were willing to explore this relationship. Okay, now which of your stories do I read next?
Veera Grier chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
This story is SO wonderful! Actually, this is the third time I read it, and I cry every time. This is so sad and you express perfectly their feelings. Ronon is so sweet with Jennifer. Thank you for sharing.
Whirlwind421 chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
Good story. Very sad.
039NX1L chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
This story was so compelling. I truly adored it.

You hit on all of the emotions really well and you did so respectfully. Then again, I expect nothing less because you're an amazing writer. :)
Elliesmeow chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
Great fic, I think you hit just the right tone with characterization and reactions to the major plot. Not to mention doing a fair job explaining why Jennifer would reject a man like Ronon in favor of McKay. That never really made sense to me.

Thanks for the post, I hope it was healing.

-Ellie
hifield chapter 3 . 11/11/2009
Thanks for sharing ... it was wonderful.
hifield chapter 2 . 11/11/2009
This is so sad but you have nailed the emotions. I want to tell you how good it is but somehow that seems wrong because it's so sad. But ... it IS a great chapter.
hifield chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Very well written chapter - very moving. I hurt for both of them.
Dragowolf chapter 3 . 4/9/2009
*drying eyes with tissue* Oh that was so sad... and yet so sweet... Jen lost and baby and Ronon was there to comfort her...

I'm sorry for any woman who has ever suffered a miscarriage... I hope Mel is doing better... And that she had her "Ronon" there to help her through the pain.
aradiaeva chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
Absolutely amazing way you dealt with such a heartbreaking situation. You described all the emotions and feelings so perfectly. Awesome job
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