|Reviews for Hurt Like This|
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/3
How does she go from madly in love with jake to this? Your such an Edward girl, why bother writing stories about Jake and Bella? This isn't what you advertised! This is why I hate your stories
| TJ Carta chapter 2 . 3/9/2014
Oh man my heart just broke into a million pieces! I though Jacob and Bella were going to finally have their time! Wah!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
Disappointing. If you're going to write a J/B story do it right or don't do it at all. Through out the story I could tell you are team E.
| sweetdreams1 chapter 15 . 1/20/2011
yeah she's a bitch. An ugly little fat bitch. LOL 5ft tall and and 140 pounds is more than plump. And you think Jacob would mystically feel she was more than Bella. *snort* NOT
| sweetdreams1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
well why the hell would you have him imprint on a fat kid? It's like you deliberately shove him into second class citizen mode.
Alert: This author is totally E/B shipping, even if the story sucks you in otherwise.
| BelievesInNargles chapter 9 . 1/19/2011
it's really good, i did not expect bella to get back with edward or that Jacob would imprint on someone.
| bellandeannedwardfan78 chapter 26 . 11/25/2010
i love it and omg cant wait to read the next installment of the four part series
| nightshadowlife chapter 25 . 8/17/2010
I Hated the fact that Jacob imprinted and Angela died and Bella was tortured.. But it was an amazing story and I can't wait to see the next story!
| caroline chapter 9 . 2/27/2010
i think kyle can put thoughts in peoples heads and make them do what he wants. btw cam gigandet is also in a movie called never back down it's a really good movie... anyway your story is really good so far! i can't wait to see what happens next!bye
| Feenrai chapter 24 . 9/18/2009
I thought the whole story was wonderful:) A great ending. I'm glad she spent more time with the pack, even if it was a bit of a one-time thing. I actually think in time, once she's more over Jacob and ensconced with Edward, she and Alyssa could be good friends...I think the Sam Emily Leah triangle would be all over if Leah fell in love, so I don't think there will be too much fear of a similar Jacob Lys Bella triangle...lol
I'm SO glad that no one was hurt, and that Kyle's gone! On a side note, I just realized that when I read your story I had in mind this one creepy guy I knew named Kyle...he totally could fit the psychotic description! :P
And lastly, I can't wait to move on to part three!
| Feenrai chapter 21 . 9/18/2009
Poor Angela! She's my second favorite human character (Bella being the first). I always wish she could be a vampire too...I bet she'd have an awesome power _ Someday I should write that...lol. Anyway, that WAS good torture for Bella, but it was so sad :'(
| Feenrai chapter 18 . 9/18/2009
Ok, so first off, I want to tell you that this installment of the series is SO good! I think you did the BEST job of writing the Cullen/Pack relationship that I have ever read. It is so seriously believeable...I love it! I also love that you had a bit of Jacob/Lys in it. And I didn't think she was a bitch at all...I mean, if it was me...and I'm brand new to a place...some strange guy tells me he loves me and he's a werewolf and I'm his imprint...I'd think it was a cruel joke! And the fact that she would be feelings for him too would make her fear it even more, because many people tend to have low self esteem and think they don't deserve good things...add in that it's only been a week, and she finds out that he broke up with his last girlfriend the DAY he met her...and now he's out protecting her...it'd be so new and confusing and upseting!
Lol, ok so that was long. Secondly, I'm so glad the poll you did turned out a third (and later) fourth installment! I'm sure the next installment will be all about the Volturi, and we all know how interesting they are! So I can't wait to slowly catch up with all the twilight fics you have! And then maybe try some of the HP...lol
Ok, and the last thing, which isn't a major thing, just a sort of...I've been there...that I wanted to share is about losing consciousness. I don't know if you've ever lost consciousness, but very often you don't remember what caused it, or even a minute or two or five (in severe cases). So that could be a potentially interesting thing you could use in any of your future fanfics...what if, for example, the knockout had been a really bad one (like a day maybe), and Bella came to not remembering anything Jacob had said? That'd be interesting/humorous. Anyway, that's about it, and as always, keep up the great work!
| Feenrai chapter 6 . 9/18/2009
But it's too sad! She shouldn't have to lose the whole pack like that! I can't bring myself to think they'd do that...they love her like a sister...and even though it would be hard for Jacob/Bella/Aly...I think it'd be harder to see the whole pack missing Bella when they all love her so much and she lost her father, and to know that she's suffering even more...I wish they would have decided to tell her that just because Jacob had imprinted she'd always have a place in their pack...it's just so sad...
But, from a safety perspective, it does make sense. Because at least if Bella's not actually right there, the grief at any one time would be less likely to result in any kind of accident or lapse of guarding attention. Still, just so sad:( BUT, at least it was a good entrance to the reuniting of Edward and Bella! But now poor Roxanne will be alone...part of me is like, Kyle and Rox should be together...after kyle gets a MAJOR personality makeover, lol. But I don't think anything in the world would make Rox be with him after everything he did...but then again, if Kari can forgive Edward bad things since he tries to become a better man, perhaps Rox could do the same for Kyle? Just my thoughts as I read the story...great job as always!
| Feenrai chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
*sniff sniff* That made me cry! It's so sad! And I feel the worst right now for Jacob because he feels so guilty and torn...and he'll feel so bad going into this his new relationship...I hope things turn out well for Bella so he can enjoy his relationship with Aly. And poor Bella! But hopefully now she can end up with Edward.
I really liked Without You. I liked the way you played out the Edward/Jacob relationships and so forth. And I like the switch they're taking now, because I've always felt that Edward and Bella should be together and Jacob and in imprint...because what happened to Jacob could happen at any time...he could have been married to Bella and had three kids when it happened! That's just such a scary thought...
So really well written, it made me cry...but in a good way for the story. Can't wait to read on!
| AColdAndBrokenHallelujah chapter 11 . 7/2/2009
Okay I think that I know what the song is. I'm not sure if this is the title, but I think it is I'm Still a Guy by ?Brad Paisley? I'm not sure who it is though