|Reviews for Cold Masks and Lost Souls|
| Charlie Quill chapter 3 . 1/9/2004
It's original, I like it. Twenty points to Slytherin!
| Indigo Ziona chapter 3 . 6/4/2002
This is excellent! Your writing style is very beautiful and expressive (English isn't your first language? You put English speakers to shame!) and I like the unusual pairing, and all the background you've put in - it's engrossing already.
| Yolanda chapter 3 . 2/7/2002
I loved your take on Narcissa as a young girl. It makes me really sad after chapter one. I'm sure she'll soon meet with the burdens of her family name and status, but at least for a while, she was a happy person. Again, your writing conveys emotion very well.
| Yolanda chapter 2 . 1/10/2002
You've really expressed their emotions well in both of these chapters. Narcissa seems to be going through the motions out of necessity and so does Severus. I can imagine that they could have been attracted to each other at one time. I'm going to assume that Slytherins tend to stick together. Please continue. You have a very brooding writing style. (I mean that as a compliment).
| Elspeth chapter 1 . 1/3/2002
Really good discriptive language-almost romance novelly (be careful that the imagery doesn't get too over the top).
It's Narcissa Malfoy's POV, isn't it? That would explain why Snape has always favored Draco.
| guess chapter 2 . 11/27/2001
Snape and NARCISSA MALFOY? Ouch.
| aelis chapter 2 . 11/27/2001
It's wonderful! Please continue writing.
| Lunadaisy chapter 2 . 11/26/2001
It seems interesting so far.
| ostia chapter 2 . 11/26/2001
Intriging. I am interested to see where you take this story. Liked it.