|Reviews for A Weird Kind Of Thank You|
| Devoden chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Must say that I really like this story, and also this pairing :D I'm a big fan of Tifentine :)
| x Euphoria chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
| Varna chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
hot, hot hot hot hot!
| Missyluv chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
Now this one I LOVED! It was beyond hot! So, so good!
I kind of liked Cloud's interruption. In fact, I liked how he was upset that he had lost her. And then he leaves and Vincent comes out and they continue on while poor Cloud goes back to bed all alone and I imagine to lament what he lost. Priceless! What an idiot!
Yeah, Vincent is definitely more masculine and dreamy and would be a far better lover than Cloud. Sigh. I still like the Reeve thing better, but it is obvious Vincent is just overflowing with hidden passion.
Ha, ha. Reading your stories is a lot of fun!
| sakR9 chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
I like this chapter better. Thanks for the editation :P
| forevermare chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
I loved this story the first time around. Now I REALLY love it even more. I really didn't miss the interlude with Cloud, although it was kind of amusing the way Tifa was forced to talk about Vincent as if he weren't present.
The ending of this version is much, much better!
| Shtit chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Honesty: I didn't read then entire chapters, just brushed over it. Read the new dialogue and a few other lines but the ending was the best. The comedic Yuffie interruption was good but Tifa leading Vincent out the back door, BAM! That was money, real good ending and oh man, good ending. That ending alone is worth the rewrite.
I agree, having Cloud come in and cock-block wasn't fantastic before. It didn't break anything but it was 100% unnecessary. Now this story is better, so it was a worthwhile revision! But (I've been trying to type "but" but instead I've typed "bust" seven times in a row - what does that say?) the ending is the best.
So when you get a magical quill one day, and yes I said quill, not pen, because pens are not magical - only quills can be magical... So when you get a magical quill one day, you will transform me into an actual, living character in one of your stories. I will be someone similar to Vincent, and I will spend time alone with Tifa, studying. Deal? Deal. In return, I'll make you cinnamon sugar toast and buy you soldiers and toast beforehand. Toasty.
| LiamJJohnson chapter 2 . 11/18/2010
you know, I've (tried to) read I don't know how many bits of "adult" fan fiction on here, where the writer's basically gone: "Right, I like him, I like her, I'm gonna make 'em fuck!" and that's exactly what they do, and it's basically a written version of cheap porn.
Ah, but not this. A pulsating exploration of human senses, I wouldn't be surprised if you yourself were panting slightly writing this. Tense, emotive and with an ending so much better than last time.
You did good girl.
| ChinaDollBaBy123 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Creepy Vamp, Vinnie, followin' women around in the night
lmao! XD i loved it :3
| sakR9 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I loved this.
I loved everything about it.
SO SMEXY! Steamy... wow...
I loved every single thing you wrote and how Vincent didn't say that much... how hott is he? Woo!
One thing that bothered me was in the beginning when he first came to Tifa, he was standing really close behind her, right? So his chest to her back... How did she feel his shoulders?
Yeah, that's it. :)
Cloud's an idiot _ *walks off whistling*
| anne chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
hahaha, the ending is hilarious! yuffie - hahaha
| AlinaLotus chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
This made me realize exactly why I love VinTi so much! Very hot, very well done. Loved how in-character you kept them all. Yuffie made me laugh at the end, although she usually does. Thanks for sharing!
| pi.xxel chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
| LiamJJohnson chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
this is one of the most sensual and yet... bizzarely frustrating pieces I've read in a while. Lemme tell you something, you can write for the senses! The first half of that, up until Cloud's entrance was so sensualy potent, it could've been written by Sebastien Faulks- the words you used and the way the feeling flowed left my body tense- I mean that could've revived the dead!
But then... you broke the entire thing by having Cloud walk in and do, nothing! To be honest the way Vinnie ran into the closet actually had potential for a great comedy moment, if you wrote it that way, but Cloud's appearance and the way he coversed with Tifa just left me cold- the whole feeling of the piece evaporated, and when things got steamy again later on, I just didn't feel anything this time.
So make no mistake about it- your sensual writing and use of description is FANTASTIC! But, I would just take Cloud out of the whole thing. Because the piece was short and started out so sensually... that's kinda all I wanted as a reader if you get what I mean. So yeah, follow the emotive flow I would say!
lv x Liam
| Shadow of Intent chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
thats hot and funny! x3