Reviews for If I never knew you
TheGallifreyanAtheist chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
please write more to this story
Eleve Osirian chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
great job! )

The only little mistake I noticed was "What was going on."- I think you meant to use a question mark here. Other than that I like your style of writing.

-Kiaga
Revriley chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Good job. I think that you covered the subject very well, and...yeah. Good job!