Reviews for Totally CRAZY Total Drama Island
Ruby Sienna chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Name/Gender: Pascal Lye / Male

Hair Colour: light ginger hair

Hair Length: short

Hair Style: spiky

Eye Colour: baby blue

Eye Shape: rounded

Skin Colour: Pale

Height: Awkwardly Tall

Weight: Skinny

Other distinguishing features: Has freckles

Clothes: deep red shirt covered by a black sweater vest and navy blue skinny jeans with black sneakers, he also needs glasses. He doesn't have any dress clothes and just wears a pair of black swim trunks in the water.

Stereotype: The unpopular jerk

Attitude:Pascal is sarcastic, sometimes bitter and occasionally whimsical. He often points out the unlikelihood of certain plans and would make a good leader, strategist or consultant given his ability to instantly see flaws in a constucted plan however his innate snarkiness is the only thing preventing everyone else from comprehending this for themselves. He often resorts to acrimonious language because he thinks he is the only sane person there and is actually incapable of avoiding sarcasm due to his insecurity about expressing any genuine thought or feeling. He has intense feelings of sadness, anger, numbness and loneliness and often hides these feelings from everyone around him by being snide and arrogant. He acts very jaded and bitter on the outside but is in fact very deeply hurt. He has a very world-weary disdain for everyone and suffers from a healthy dose of isolation. He often stands aside at social gatherings making cold-hearted quips about the idiocy that surrounds him. He often doubts others leading ability and orders, making disrespectful, often insulting comments about their actions. However if you listen close enough, his negative commentary contains useful warnings against mistakes others would otherwise make. Pascal is also a very good archer relying on agility and guile rather than brute force.

Do you want to be paired with someone?: I'm not sure he would like it if i told you this but (Now whispering) He's into chicks that are a little weird, you know sorta 'crazy'.

Why your character wants to be on the show: He doesn't really, his sister forced him to go on the show but if he must answer the question then he obviously wants the money.

DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: Not really but he would prefer not to be.

Name/Gender: Ophelia Nowital

Hair Colour: Jet black

Hair Length: short

Hair Style: Pixie cut

Eye Colour: forest green

Eye Shape: cat-shaped

Skin Colour: olive

Height: incredibly short and fragile looking

Weight: Average

Other distinguishing features: none really

Clothes: Ophelia is often seen wearing a white long sleeved shirt and crimson red tie tucked into a black pencil skirt with stockings and black high heeled boots. She also has a knee length coral colored form fitting dress for special occasions, and wears a pair of black bike shorts and a black top in the water.

Stereotype: the chick with OCD

Attitude: Ophelia requires order in her life, everything has to match some kind of pattern that they approve of. Lines must be straight, angles must be just the right degree, and the numbers must absolutely match. Her social skills are extremely unused and has repeated, unwanted thoughts flow through her head. Her rituals are simply attempts to stop these thoughts. She is very good with numbers and, within seconds, can know what's going on, where the problem is and what to do to fix it, astonishing many. No detail escapes the notice of Ophelia and, with a brief scan of the area, she can deduce intimate and accurate information about an individual or place. With hyper awareness, she will sit down and know how many people are in the room, what they are doing, which ones are important and what the best exit out would be. Her ability to recall images, sounds or objects is extraordinary. She is also a neat freak and schedule fanatic.

Do you want to be paired with someone?: she would love to!

Why your character wants to be on the show: To show the world just how amazing she is of course!

DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: I'm sure she would hate it! She's in it to win it!
Totaldramafan chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Name:Luke

Gender:male

hair color:dust brown

hair length:average

eye color: gray

skin color:white

Height:short

weight:average

clothes:black shirt with pockets,black sweats,Merriles,and a plain red bathing suit

Stereotype:The Sarcastic Outsider

Attitude:bored

don't mind being paired or voted off

Why he is in the show:Because his family can use the money
Clawfire chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
**Name/Gender(nickname): Alice Von Vaneson

*Hair Colour: red

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut)LONG

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales)side bangs

*Eye Colour: Blue

*Eye Shape: round

*Skin Colour:White

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!):average

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!):skinny

Other distinguishing features: nose piercing

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!):

Everyday:Red hoodie with gray shirt,jeans and converse

Swim:Black bikini

Nighttime:Black shirt with blue sweat pants

Formal:Blue strapless dress with black heels

*Stereotype: Skater girl

Attitude: Friendly,hostile to those who are Mary Sues,is very relaxed

*Do you want to be paired with someone?:sure. Preferably David(See after Alice's form).

*Why your character wants to be on the show: The challenges

****DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: It's your story but no I do not mind.

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**Name/Gender(nickname): David Richardson

*Hair Colour:brown

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut)short

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales)messy

*Eye Colour: green

*Eye Shape:round

*Skin Colour:white

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!):average

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!):average

Other distinguishing features:nope

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!):

Everyday: Orange button up shirt(He leaves it unbuttoned) grey pants and sneakers

Formal: Tux with black sneakers

Nighttime:black sweat pant and gray shirt

Swim:Black trunks

*Stereotype: Emo

Attitude:Friendly,shy,quiet. Is quite reserved.

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: Yes Alice please

*Why your character wants to be on the show: For the fun

****DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?:nope
Alyx chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
**Name/Gender(nickname):Alyxandra, female, Alyx

*Hair Colour:Black

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut)reaches her shoulders

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales)no bangs, ponytail

*Eye Colour:emerald

*Eye Shape:normal

*Skin Colour:pale

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!):average

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!):skinny

Other distinguishing features:black choker necklace and can sing

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!):navy blue v-neck long sleeve shirt, black skinny jeans, gray converse Bathing suit: navy blue 'halter top' and black shorts

*Stereotype:'loner' likes to be alone... sometimes

Attitude: typical loner, keeps to herself, writes a lot, is sarcastic but not rude

*Do you want to be paired with someone?:yes

*Why your character wants to be on the show: she needs the money to go to college and to support her single mom

****DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?:yes i mind not much but i mind
HippieChick24 chapter 2 . 4/9/2010
**Name/Gender(nickname): Sami/Female

*Hair Colour: Brown w/ blond highlights

*Hair Length: Shoulderlength

*Hair Style: Wavy w/ side swept bangs

*Eye Colour: Brown

*Eye Shape: Almond

*Skin Colour: Light tan

Height: Short

Weight: Skinny

Other distinguishing features: none

*Clothes: Tie-dyed v-neck tee-shirt, jeans, sandles, light blue one strap mini dress, and a tie-dyed bikini

*Stereotype: The Hippie

Attitude: Sweet

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: no

*Why your character wants to be on the show: My character wants to be on the show because she is sweet, caring, and she can bring the drama when needed

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: no
Owner of Rainbow Lollipops chapter 3 . 12/22/2009
**Name/Gender(nickname): Deseree, female, no nickname

*Hair Colour: Black

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut) Couldn't be bothered cutting it, thus it reaches her posterior

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) straigh down fringe that covers her eyes

*Eye Colour: Brown

*Eye Shape: Almond-y round asian

*Skin Colour: Pale

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): average 5'5

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Average

Other distinguishing features: lean muscles

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): navy blue t-shirt, pair of white baggy shorts that reach her knees, pair of brown strappy sandals. her bathing suit is a black onepiece with a white flower print on the front

*Stereotype: Mellow zen buddhist chick- the unfazeable serene one

Attitude: speaks through fortune cookies, speaks her mind politely so it doesn't offend, incredibly smart, always calculating, logical, martial arts specialist

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: if you can

*Why your character wants to be on the show: Who knows? She's following her zen

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: Not really, like to stay atleast until the top 8 if you can

gracias
Jamie am I chapter 2 . 7/30/2009
I have five characters. If I don't have enough room in this review, I'll submit one for the next chapter.

**Name/Gender(nickname): Jamie Guerrero; Male

*Hair Colour: Jamie has dark brown hair, almost black, that has bits of natural red in it (though the red streaks are really only visible in intense light)

*Hair Length: Jamie's hair is long and shaggy, going down to his midneck in the back and just above his eyebrows in the front.

*Hair Style: Jamie has, as previously stated, shaggy hair that is always in disarray. He has sideswept bangs.

*Eye Colour: Jamie has two brown-grey eyes that are framed by a pair of black, thick rimmed glasses

*Eye Shape: Jamie's eyes are almond shaped

*Skin Colour: The very little amount of skin Jamie shows (his face, neck, hands, and legs when in a bathing suit) is a very nice, caramel color. However, the rest of his body is deathly pale, due to the large amounts of heavy clothing he wears.

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): Jamie is rather short, standing at 5, 5'' when standing up straight and 5, 3'' when slouching (the latter of which he tends to do more often)

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Jamie is a little below average weight, weighing only 114 lbs.

Other distinguishing features: Jamie has a thin nose and very long, bony fingers.

*Clothes: For everyday clothing, Jamie wears an emerald green T-shirt underneath a grey, two-sizes-too-big hoodie. The hoodie is zipped up to the middle of his chest. He also wears a pair of blue-grey skinny jeans and a pair of black Converse. On his wrist, he wears a friendship bracelet, and around his wrist, he wears a necklace with a small peace sign.

*Bathing Suit: For a bathing suit, Jamie wears a pair of black and grey swimtrunks with four green stripes running vertically up the left side. He also wears a large white T-shirt.

*Stereotype: The Silent, Shy One

Attitude: Jamie is a very shy, quiet boy, with a sarcastic streak that nobody but his closest friends notice, because he's always so quiet. He is very caring toward his friends and other ones, and will do anything to ensure that they're alwyas happy and in a good mood... even if it means talking...

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: If you manage to find another gay contestant, sure

*Why your character wants to be on the show: To overcome his phobia of talking to people and to build confidence. He also wants to prove to the kids back at his school that he's capable of accomplishing things other than than just schoolwork.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: No, but he would feel awful not making it to where the teams merge.

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**Name/Gender(nickname): Evan Oakley; Male

*Hair Colour: Evan has sandy blond hair with a few natural light brown highlights.

*Hair Length: Evan has hair that rests between long and short in length. It goes to just above his midneck in the back and it goes to his mid forhead in the front.

*Hair Style: Evan has slightly mussed hair and, like Jamie, has side swept bangs.

*Eye Colour: Evan has hazel eyes.

*Eye Shape: Evan has wide, circular like eyes (think Lindsay's eye shape)

*Skin Colour: Jamie has very pale skin.

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): Evan is 5, 6''.

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Evan weighs a bout 130 lbs.

Other distinguishing features: Evan has a nose much like DJ's and very broad hips and shoulders.

*Clothes: Evan wears a white button up (though he wears it unbottoned) with the sleeves rolled up to his elbow. Beneath the button up, he wears a lime green T-shirt. He also wears a pair of light blue carpenter styled jeans and black and white checkered Vans. Around his neck, he wears a necklace from his girlfriends around his neck.

*Stereotype: The Thespian

Attitude: Evan is very outgoing and fun-loving, always trying to get his friends to crack a grin. He tends to be very dramatic, and LOVES to use any chance he gets to practice his acting.

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: Yes, please.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: He signed up to have a good time and to offer Jamie a confidence booster whenever he needs it. Plus the money would help him out a lot.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: He's fine with getting voted off.

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**Name/Gender(nickname): Kimberly Long; Female

*Hair Colour: Kimberly has black hair with bits of dark grey highlights.

*Hair Length: Kimberly has long, waist length hair, held back by a coffee brown headband.

*Hair Style: Kimberly has straight hair with bands in the front that part to stay out of her eyes.

*Eye Colour: Kimberly has crystal blue eyes.

*Eye Shape: Kimberly has two almond shaped eyes that are slightly slanted.

*Skin Colour: Kimberly has lightly tanned skin.

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): Kimberly is rather tall, standing at a height of 5, 8''.

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Kimberly weighs 117 lbs.

Other distinguishing features: Kimberly has a small birthmark at the bottom right side of her mouth.

*Clothes: Kimberly wears a mint blue Peter Pan collared blouse over a fuschia tank top. She wears a pair of khaki pants that stop just above her ankle and a pair of blue and purple TOMS. Around he neck, she wears a crystal blue diamond necklace given to her at birth and on her right wrist she wears a brown cuff with a gold stripe running down the center.

*Stereotype: The Worrisome Older Sister

Attitude: Kimberly is a very prim and proper type of girl, one who always has to work with a schedule or plan. She doesn't speak any more than necessary and worries VERY much for her younger twin sister, Yuki (see application below).

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: That's up to you.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: TO keep an eye on her sister, Yuki and to try and be a little more easy going.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: Yes! She completely minds getting voted off, because then she'll be away from her sister.

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**Name/Gender(nickname): Yuki Long; Female

*Hair Colour: Yuki has black hair with dark purple streaks.

*Hair Length: Yuki has long, waist length hair.

*Hair Style: Yuki has messy hair that tends to have a mind of its own. Atop her head, is a pair of black, furry cat ears with pink trim.

*Eye Colour: Yuki has a pair of amethyst eyes.

*Eye Shape: Yuki has a pair of almond shaped, slightly slanted eyes.

*Skin Colour: Yuki has lightly tanned skin.

Height: Yuki is rather tall, standing at a height of 5, 7''.

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Yuki weighs 119 lbs.

Other distinguishing features: Yuki has a small birthmark at the bottom right side of her mouth.

*Clothes: Yuki wears a light green midriff with the phrase "I Love Yaoi" written in black on the front (The word "Love", though, is replaced by a large red heart). Over the T-shirt, she wears a black hooded jacket, with grey and purple striped sleeves and a furry hood. She wears a magenta mini skirt that is held up over a black belt, below which she wears a pair of neon green leggings that go down to her knees. She wears a pair of black Converse with multiple little sayings written on the white tongues, and three pins on the bottom of her jacket. To match her sister she wears an amethyst colored diamond necklace. She also wears a black and purple faux cat tail that is attached to her belt.

*Stereotype: The Anime Freak/Yaoi Fanatic

Attitude: Yuki is a VERY hyper and peppy girl, always smiling and shouting at the top of her lungs at the most inappropriate times. She loves sugar and caffeine and loves Yaoi even more.

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: No.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: To have a fun time and to get her sister to loosen up a little bit.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: She doesn't mind whatsoever but she hopes that she gets the boot before her sister does.

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**Name/Gender(nickname): Parker Umanski; Male.

*Hair Colour: Parker has chocolate brown hair with natural chestnut brown highlights.

*Hair Length: Parker has midlength hair that goes do his midnieck in the back and covers his right eye in the front.

*Hair Style: Parker has long bangs in the front and his hair flips up in the back.

*Eye Colour: Parker has light green-blue eyes.

*Eye Shape: Parker has two two round large eyes that are always half-lidded, giving him a relaxed look.

*Skin Colour: Parker has nice tanned skin, with a bit of a caramel tone.

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): Parker is very tall, standing at a height of 6, 2''.

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Parker weighs 129 lbs.

Other distinguishing features: On the base of his neck, Parker has a tatoo of a dancer.

*Clothes: Parker wears a light grey T-shirt with the words "J & L Dance Center" written in maroon writing. He wears a pair of dark grey dance pants with a dark red stripe running vertically up side (the pants stop just a little bit above the ankle). He is more often than not seen wearing a pair of black tap shoes. On his wrist, he wears a red LIVESTRONG bracelet on his right wrist.

*Stereotype: The Dancer.

Attitude: Parker is very energetic, but not to the point where it's obnoxious. He's a people person, to say the least, and has many friends with whom he is extremely close.

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: Yes.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: To enjoy his summer and to advertise his dance school.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: Not at ain
ThisIsMyName333 chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
**Name/Gender(nickname): Brooklyn or Brooke

*Hair Colour: golden blond

*Hair Length:(Short, Buzz Cut?): Long, reaches her hips

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) long bangs that are usually tucked back behind her ears

*Eye Colour: sky blue

*Eye Shape: almond

*Skin Colour: white

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): tall, 5'9

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): skinny

Other distinguishing features: always smells like strawberries

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BAITING SUIT STYLE!):

Normal Attire: denim capris, brown sandals, a white tank top

Swimsuit: blue boy trunks and a white bikini top

Pajamas: a blue nightshirt that reaches her knees; is decorated with stars on the sleeves

Formal: a sky blue sleeveless dress

*Stereotype: Friendly musician(she plays guitar and writes her own songs)

Attitude: funny, cheerful, friendly, nice

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: Kevin(see reviews)...if he makes it and doesn't have a problem being in a relationship with her.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: She wants to have some adventure this summer.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: As long as I'm not one of the first voted off, I think I'll be okay.
ang5523 chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
**Name/Gender(nickname): Joey Sky Wheeler Male (Joe)

*Hair Colour: strawberry blond

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut) short

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) like geoff's

*Eye Colour: saphire blue

*Eye Shape: like his sisters

*Skin Colour: tan

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): tall about 6"0

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): skinny

Other distinguishing features: black sunglasses

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): blue top and jean shorts with blue hightops white dress shirt and black pants with black dress shoes, blue trunks

*Stereotype: skater boy

Attitude: laid back, cool

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: yes a hot girl

*Why your character wants to be on the show: to keep a eye on his twin sister and to make sure nobody hurts her

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: not if he can help it or to make it to the final three
ang5523 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
**Name/Gender(nickname): Lilly Ann Wheeler Female (Lil)

*Hair Colour: strawberry blond

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut) mid back

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) in a high ponytail

*Eye Colour: saphire blue

*Eye Shape: like Lindsay

*Skin Colour: lighty tan

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): average about 5"7

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): skinny

Other distinguishing features: birthmark in a shape of a heart on the bottom of her left leg

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): light pink top and jean with the knees worn out with black wedges, light blue short sleeve knee lenght with blue heels, light purple two piece

*Stereotype: party girl

Attitude: loves to be around people, like geoff

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: yes a hot guy

*Why your character wants to be on the show: to find a boyfriend to be on tv

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: not really but I want to a least be in the top two
PimpedOutGreenEars chapter 3 . 12/31/2008
**Name/Gender(nickname): Zac, sometimes called Zeek. Male.

*Hair Colour: Light brown, so light that he often gets told it's gray, which makes him angry and incourages his friends to keep saying it is.

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut) Short, about 2 inches long.

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) Spiked, always perfect.

*Eye Colour: Light blue.

*Eye Shape: Round.

*Skin Colour: White, with a light tan.

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): 6'0 feet.

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): Average

Other distinguishing features: Slight acnie.

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): A red shirt with blue jeans. He has black shoes. He wears black swimming trunks with a red stripe down the sides.

*Stereotype: That gay social whore, who claims he's Jewish even though he's not.

Attitude: He's a really funny for the most part. He's in a good mood 99 days out of 100, but on that one day no one wants to be around him. He's a bit of a priss which is why people always say he's gay, although he denys it.

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: Doesn't matter.

*Why your character wants to be on the show: To prove he's a man. He gets teased by his friends all the time so he wants to prove them wrong. He also plays a trumpit in the band, and if he's gone all summer he gets to skip band camp, and probably marching season all together. He also thinks it'll get his ex best friend to see how cool he is and stop ignoring him so they can be best friends again.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: He would prefer not to but whatever happens, happens.
Ie-maru chapter 3 . 12/25/2008
Darnit! Now I feel embarrassed.

I reviewed the chapter before this to submit my character, but hit enter before giving you the details.

The last review was the warning about me submitting him to other stories too to see him in action and hope that at least ONE author continues their story or chooses my character.

Here we go, finally (blushes)

**Name/Gender(nickname):Matthias Lawrence (is an albino) Boy

Is 17 years old. (His nickname is given by the people who tease/hate him "Batty Matty")

*Hair Colour: White (b/c, as above, he's an albino)

*Hair Length: Long - to the small of his back

*Hair Style: strait to the small of his back

*Eye Colour: red/pink (again, he's an albinoJ)

*Eye Shape: Wide (he's slightly insane -cough: morethanalittle:cough-)

*Skin Colour: white (albino)

Height: 5'9"

Weight: 145 lbs - lithe

Other distinguishing features: white teeth (laughs)

*Clothes: Wears a white shirt under a doctor/scientist's overcoat (it's closed, so you don't really see the shirt); wears loose, blue-jeans; wears a white suit for formal events; wears worn sneakers; wears red shorts for a bathing suit

*Stereotype: Mad Scientist

Attitude: cheerful, energetic, morally aware, romantic, insane

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: yes, a nice girl that can understand and accept him

*Why your character wants to be on the show: Can I just give you his audition tape from another review?

If not, he wants not only to get money for a good university (he's the up-and-coming scientific prodigy, you know) but also to get some friends...he doesn't really have any

If so, here's his tape

Suddenly, the tape turns on and the first thing you see are wide, possibly insane, pink/red eyes.

"Hello!" the boy's voice chirps.

The boy backs away and the camera focuses in on a boy with all the requirements of being an albino...and belonging in an insane asylum if you really want to dig deep.

"My name's Matthias Lawrence! I'm an up-and-coming scientific prodigy-" you hear an explosion and blue smoke poofs behind the boy, "-who's super-cool skills can do just about anything with any kind of chemical or technological device! Muahahahahahahahahaha!"

After about five minutes of maniacal laughter, in which you hear a woman shouting 'shut up!', the boy finally opens his eyes and focuses them back on the camera lense.

"I really should be considered because of my unique abilities." Matthias continues in a scarily serious voice. "I hope to win and plan on using the money to pay my way into the best univertiy I can find."

Suddenly the boy's face breaks into a wide grin and he waves.

"Tootles!"

The screen goes blank.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: I think anyone would mind, but I understand that it's neccessary and it's your story, so it's your choice! Do as you will.

I realy hope you include him.
Ie-maru chapter 2 . 12/25/2008
Warning: I posted Matthias on other stories like this (I REALLY WANT TO SEE HIM IN ACTION AND WANT TO MAKE SURE THAT AT LEAST ONE AUTHOR CONTINUES THEIR STORY)
Sibuna97 chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
**Name/Gender(nickname): Tessa, Female, Tess

*Hair Colour: Brown

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut):shoulder length

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales)bangs and kind of curly

*Eye Colour:Brown

*Eye Shape:almond

*Skin Colour:tan

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!):average

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!):skinny

Other distinguishing features: birthmark on right arm near the shoulder, a scar close to my left eye

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): Pink with black dots, blue jeans OR sweatpants, blue and white dress, blue and white tennis shoes, 2 piece pink bathing suit

*Stereotype: geek tomboy kinda and a band nerd

Attitude: outside school mean kinda and inside nice

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: yes

*Why your character wants to be on the show: she loves challenges and she wants to meet some smart kids and people who are in band

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: kinda she means if she got voted off it will be alright because of the fun she had and if you have the lexuary island she would kinda love that but she wants to stay in as long as possible
Toph Is Legend chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
**Name/Gender(nickname): Female Lanna

*Hair Colour: black with red streaks

*Hair Length:(Short Buzz Cut) long to middle of back

*Hair Style: (Side swept bangs, pig tales) bangs down to nose covering eyes and curved in at the bottom so yo cant see eyes. hair is super straight

*Eye Colour: blue

*Eye Shape: same as a regualar eye

*Skin Colour: pale white

Height:(short,average,tall,HUGE!): average 5' 3

Weight:(Skinny, Average, Over Weight, HUGE!): skinny

Other distinguishing features: has killer cheek bones doesnt where make up

*Clothes: (Top, Bottom, Dress, Shoes, AND I NEED A BATHING SUIT STYLE!): a black tanktop with red stripes, black skinny jeans, black and red high top convers, bathing suit: Red bikini with black tripes

*Stereotype: punk

Attitude: doesnt talk to anyone much. if someone talks to her she'll answer in a 2 word sentence. she will talk to people she gets to know

*Do you want to be paired with someone?: yes

*Why your character wants to be on the show: she likes to be challenged and her parents wanted her out of the house.

*DO YOU MIND GETTING VOTED OFF?: i dont mind if u want her to but if you can not first lol :)
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