Reviews for Harry and His New Family
Alex chapter 84 . 6/4
Alex chapter 80 . 6/4
Did he just accidentally apparate
Alex chapter 71 . 6/4
All the guys in my band want that spell
Alex chapter 70 . 6/4
Harry with flat hair? Serious magic
Alex chapter 67 . 6/3
Poor Harry, you are so mean to him
Alex chapter 58 . 6/3
I half expected a panic attack, I'm not even sure he won't still have one.
Alex chapter 57 . 6/3
Harry is gonna get in trouble
Alex chapter 55 . 6/3
Harry is an idiot, and ought to be attended 24/7
Alex chapter 54 . 6/3
Harry is an idiot, he should know better than to take performance enhancers
Alex chapter 52 . 6/3
Is Severus acting scary, or is he acting scared
Alex chapter 37 . 6/2
If Harry starts going suicidal I hope you have a good reason
Alex chapter 34 . 6/2
Reminds me of my sister and me when we're home alone. I think my parents are convinced we only argue to annoy them
Alex chapter 28 . 6/2
Ha, Harry must have been seriously panicked to think he could escape Moody
Alex chapter 27 . 6/2
You must love ending like that to do it twice in a row.
Alex chapter 24 . 6/2
You had a few errors in this chapter, you might want to proofread it, or have someone else proofread it, also, your conversations would sound more natural if you try to add contractions like can't, we'll, and I'll. I understand you might have trouble with that because translators don't add them, but most people use them. I love the plot though, Harry isn't going to get the potion and do it perfectly right away, so don't worry about that
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