Reviews for Awaken My Love
amyrobotnick chapter 3 . 3/4
This is such a wonderful and well written story, as a writer myself and fan of unique stories like this, i am very impressed with the amount of effort and skill you put into this work. I love your diction, it creates an ambiance of: if this were the given circumstances, this would be a very natural response to everything. Characters are true through and through, and you have a well plotted out script that just overflows with excitement to what you will write next. I wish i could give a critique that would improve your writing like i try to get people to do for me and stop being shy, but i truly can't find anything wrong in any sort of aspect, of course, that's one person's opinion, but i really can't find a single thing wrong with it. Well done, :)
xyz chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
I really enjoyed this story and find her friends very likable charas. The plot never went where I thought it would :D

Thank you very much for sharing this story.

(I feels very close to ending *hint hint*)
Honoria Granger chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
I really hate when writers don't finish excellent stories...you seem to do that a lot.
Honoria Granger chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
Dessert, not desert. Splayed her fingers, not spayed (!).
Honoria Granger chapter 8 . 6/20/2013
I find it really unlikely that Marcus is able to just pop in wherever he feels like, into places that you would assume to be heavily guided. It's not a fatal flaw, but I find it most distracting. Otherwise, I'm loving it. And it's Council, not Counsel.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/2/2012
Wow that was the best..and closest interpretation I've read yet of what could happen after the story ended. I can't even go into a detailed review...holy cow that was epic! whens the next chapter?
SoulWithoutAName chapter 13 . 6/13/2012
Awesome! Please do go on! I'm sure the story is almost finished! Keep going, please! I really liked it!
jessikasmagik chapter 13 . 5/5/2012
oh man i wish u would finish this one very interesed in how it will continue is that peter pan i saw ;)
Alearah chapter 13 . 3/14/2012
Again i commend you for such a wonderful storyline, but mourn the fact that it is again unfinished. Don't keep us all in suspense. ;) conclude it! We all await with held breaths for its continuation. Xxx
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 13 . 2/23/2012
THIS IS SO FRAKING AWESOME I WANT TO READ MORE SO BAD! , You have made me laugh, drool, and cry. And that is a good thing, I really hope your still writing this amazing fic and if you are I will be looking forward to that chappie when it comes. Thank you for making my day a brighter one. ,
Reme chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
okay I'll call him a pedophile lol but one that has morals. This does not sound like the same vein of writing and believe me I am a good judge at that as I taught English in college for many years. You write in a totally different style than you have in the story I read prior. There seems to be about two years of maturity between this story and the one previous. You are also better at wording and developing your characters such as Stink and Dink. Perhaps you have now studied writing in college or you have a natural talent that has developed exceptionally over time. This story does not flow for me, but it has merit, and I will keep reading. As I told you in your previous story, the one where Jareth ends up wounded as an owl, well, it is better than The Goblin Market, or The End of Days. That is saying a great deal since both of those writers are exceptionally talented. Maybe that is why you abandoned this story, and moved onto to something that showed you real talents. I am aware how a writer can put something aside that is immature, and it is hard to get the blood flowing again for that story. I have been critical of style, yes, but it meant as good criticism. I am going to explore some of your other stories that you wrote later.
reme chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I'm going to read a little more of this to see if I like it better, but, if you know what an incubus is this is what he sounds like. I guess that would be fitting for Jareth. He is restraining himself, so I'll try just one more chapter. i personally like the other story with Dink and Stink and the other Goblins so much better, the one I read before this one, Sarah, seems way to young for him to be fooling around with her like that.
HachimansKitsune chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Wow...I read this whole thing last night and loooooved it! I am particularly fond of the first 8 chapters or so. The developing relationship would squick alot of people I suspect, but it is the relationship I always imagined when I first saw the movie/read the book when I was 13/14. *wistful sigh*

So, I adored it. Thanks so much for the story. :))
Ryxbantti chapter 13 . 8/3/2011
Oh my, wow. I really don't have words for this, it is just simply amazing! I was searching for a short fanfiction to read, because usually fanfictions can't keep my attention for long, but this was amazing, and it held my attention all 13 chapters. I really love this, it's amazing. Haha it makes me wish it could be real life, I wish I were Sarah.
VampireMafiaQueen chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
I hope you update this story soon because I really love it along with your other fans!
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