Reviews for The City Of Masks
LadyxAbsinthe chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
I am loving this story right now! And I love Yue's personality, even though she's grown up in a very dark and all around disturbing world she still isn't completely clouded by her anger or anything like that, infact she comes off as a very logical person. I can't wait to see how Szayel and Yue interact, it should be VERY interesting!
xLilim chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Okay, okay, I'm totally feeling this story. Your writing style is so...addicting. :3 I really can't wait to see what else come after this prologue.

To the next chapter~
Cute Apples chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
I remember reading this a bit ago and not being able to review due to time restrictions. And then I promptly forgot just WHAT I had read besides I dim remembrance of some kind of post-War dystopia type of situation. So glad I was able to find it again!

Anyway, I'm really eager to see where you go with this and how you flesh out the story. I like the idea of the dystopia, and you've set that up well. Additionally, I really like the idea of her developing her own spiritual powers and zanpakuto on her own; that's pretty awesome.

I think Yue's musings on post-War Ichigo and Renji would be incredibly accurate, especially how she noted that she didn't know them beforehand so couldn't judge their personalities because of that.

I'm intensely curious as to how you're going to introduce Szayel into the story and get him and Yue to hook up (since this IS romance) in a believable way. Can't wait for the update!

...and wow, I just looked at the published/update dates and discovered that I better not be holding out for an update anytime soon. I know how that is, but I hope you keep in the writing vibe (since this was only updated a little while ago) and post some more chapters!
One percent chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
your OC character is really interesting! which is a rare fact in fictions so I must say bravo.

I am definitely in love with the story! you have a beautiful mastery of your words, the chase scene was so great and intense. As for yue's thoughts about Aizen, they are very intriguing.

Please, update soon! I am impatient to read about Szayel and the arrancar!
One percent chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
I don't know what to say about this. It's amazing how you managed to create this.

The depression of poor Ichigo is infectious. I want to cry. Poor... everyone. One good point: Mayuri is DEAD! YAY! The jerk deserved it! but HOW IN HEAVEN could GIN KILL RAN? NO THAT CAN'T BE! O_o but then again, I don't know the guy very well, but it seems like something he would not do.

I love your writing style, it's really beautiful and unique. I also love the chaos. Now, I am impatient to see the rest
One percent chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This is excellent, and your idea is excellent.

The story being told this way made it even more tragical.

I love it so far
triggerspec chapter 2 . 10/15/2009
amazing just flat out amazing! like you should write novels :P i just love the way you write the detail the darkness in it all the creativity the go out on a whim kinda thing . fantastic.. i sound so dorky with the praise XD but its true.. im excited for future updates!
triggerspec chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
i really enjoy your writing. i hope to be able to read future chapters. (:
xxx chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Very impressive, and even if the story isn't completely thought out that doesn't make it any less of a good read. Besides, some of the best stories evolve out of random bursts of creativity. Hopefully you'll continue this story, can't wait to see more descriptive writing! (Especially since it's SO well done!) Good luck with future writing!
Cookiekitten chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Wonderful (but very sad) update! The action scenes were really well written, and Ichigo's POV was interesting to read. Great job!
cheeky half-demon chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Nice chapter! Hope you update! :D
ready.aim.fire333 chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
very pleasant surprise. when i saw an update for this story i was shocked, but happy. it was a hellish chapter, so many people dying and going crazy, but it was well written and i enjoyed every bit of it. i enjoy reading more of this story. so, since it's so late, im gonna end here, otherwise i'll keep going 'til i dont make sense anymore *grin*. great update, stories where evil prevail are lots of fun to read, and im glad you've taken this challenge on. k, im done! i swear!
Colbi-D chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I think you have a pretty good start! I'm excited to see what is going to happen in the rest of the story, plus I think it is a pretty good concept!

Great job so far!
cheeky half-demon chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Sounds like a really interesting fic! I hope you can update soon!
Moonshine's Guide chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Very Interesting… I can't wait to see where this goes…

KEEP WRITING!
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