Reviews for A puzzle to put together
Firediva0 chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
This is really good and I look forward to more! Good luck on this story.
Colorful-Crap chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
now you made me curious! xD hope you'll update soon I really really really wanna read more of this :)
shadowdolls chapter 2 . 3/8/2011
maaaahhh well this looks like an interesting story. Hope you update soon it sounds really cool. though dramatic o.O
XxGothicXxXLolitaxX chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
Awe... I so lover your story! TTTT It was the best i've ever read and im not kidding! If you didn't know where it was going then that's ok, you just have to think things through a little more but the best stories are the ones that arn't fully planned lol. I've made a lot of great rps that way " I so look forward to reading this story again! But please take your time you can't rush prefection! I wish you luck
timcanpy8me chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
you could have just started a new fanfic i liked it how it was even if it was never continued
AnjoRemix chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
ROFL that's very interesting i'm assuming u're from Mexico then lol and hope u keep ur promise on ur updates! 3
DGrayManFanatic chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
Well, I just found this story, so I guess I'm kind of glad to be reading this just as you're changing it. And I really liked how you started it. It really caught my attention. Don't listen to any of the haters, and I can't wait for an update! :)
fail chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
what a crappy author you turn out to be. i regret clinking this story.
silverXshadow chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
I like the beginning. And 'comma' is spelled coma.
moshimellow chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
Really like this idea! :D

I hope you have an update for me.


Great job! Looking forward to the next chappie!
FireFox Vixen chapter 7 . 1/11/2011
Beautifully written!
janrockiss chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
Heh just started reading this story and...well the story seems kinda weird to me (no offense) but i just can't grasp the whole story. Slow, i know. But hahas it seems like you put a little of KHR in this story, with the guardians and mafia thing. So...yup :D Look forward to more chapters so i can UNDERSTAND WHAT IS GOING ON!
Rosetta chapter 7 . 12/24/2010

i can't wait fer an update :D

oh, and Merry Christmas!
Pearl of the Orient Seas chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
Wow! You should be gratefull! I read this untill it was morning when I started at night! :( I didn't notice the time...hehehe... XD
Pearl of the Orient Seas chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Hey! Wait a minute! Allen's brother? Allen does not have a brother in the manga! but wait...he is the 14th...he's supposed to be Mana's brother! wait a minute...I CAN'T FIGURE THIS OUT! McGrin...The Earl? No...Allen? I thought about that before becuse of his eating a lot of food but seeing Tyki to be the best candidate...I put that on my review...Deffinately not Tyki! seems that it's Allen! All the clues are leading to him...but...he said he's not Allen...the way he reacted about the white hair...he knows Allen somehow...or he is Allen himself!...he may be Mana? No...he was the 14th that cancels out Mana...he must be Neah...but it said here he is Allen's brother...well he only said it...he may be lying...AURGH! yeah...I am slow...
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