|Reviews for Water|
| Strawberry Champagne chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I really like this fic, it's so cute! :) I actually had thought about Karol having a similar conversation about girls with Yuri, and this played out in general a lot like I imagined it. The characters are spot on. Good job.
| Baby Kat Snophlake chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
o, I really liked it!
There was a second person I was reading it to, and she really liked it as well. We both agreed that you did a good job keeping them in character. Great job!
I do want to mention though, don't be afraid to use the word "said." You could've gotten away with it a couple times in this short little ficlet, and it wouldn't have been so awkward to see the other verbs in there, like groaned, sighed, wondered, those kinds of things.
Other than that, you are doing well. * favorites *
| spellcoats chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Karol's (and your) assessment of Yuri is spot-on. And beautifully described. Although I don't know if a burst dam is a force of nature, but that's a technicality...
But yeah. I loved it.
| icys chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Sweet, warm heart story. I like it :)
| LaZyEnErGeTiC chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! this is a very sweet brotherly bonding time more people should make fics like these... XD