|Reviews for The Crossroad Odyssey: Memos of the Other Ketchum|
| Guest chapter 35 . 7/22/2013
Stop stalling! Update this good x-over...NOW!
| NeoMiniTails chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Hey sorry, I haven't reviewed since last year... Gomen nassai! Gomen nassai! Anyways, onto the review:
I liked the chapter and enjoyed the interactions between the characters... I haven't read Caro N's story in a long time, but Chloe seemed a bit OOC to me. Also, I liked your explanation for why Pokemon are not really seen in real Tokyo... though I don't think its very realistic, I like the reasoning. They're banned... I would have included the trainers in that law personally.
The chapter wasn't perfect... you're still adding & rather than "and," adding the actual numbers rather than spelling numbers, all these things cause your flow to mess up when you're writing. You don't want a bad flow in your writing.
Will Sakura and Ash be a couple later on in this story?
I suggest getting a beta reader whom can fix those issues for you and help with the flow.
Btw, my pokemon/digimon crossover has been updated a few times if you wanna still check it out. Its called "My Destinies Intertwined."
| thrill-i-am chapter 27 . 9/28/2012
got some interesting reads along the chapters i've read (good take on the characters of their respective animes), but this chapter definitely takes the cake of being one of the best in terms of plot and action.
| thrill-i-am chapter 14 . 7/28/2012
good chapter describing the origins of chloe as well as the true awakening of david's powers. it's also funny how ash reacted to david's capture of articuno as well. i'll read on!
| thrill-i-am chapter 11 . 7/28/2012
pretty good on how u slightly remade the final sailor moon episode with including david as one of the key people that successfully held off galaxia until sailor moon recovered. galaxia in the anime REALLY needed to be taken down a peg or 2. seems kind of weird how david managed to acquire zapdos though, but it must be or something.
| thrill-i-am chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Hmmm...gotta say this is an interesting start. Could use a little more work on bringing the emotions of the characters though. I'll read on then as long as this multi-x-over is good.
| KamKetTsu89 chapter 35 . 7/12/2012
focused a bit more on Sailor Moon rather than Pokemon/Digimon. oh well, if it's that important, then i can't complain & i liked it nevertheless.
| Major Simius chapter 35 . 7/12/2012
love it, esp. with the return of chaos. wished u finished the confrontation of nehellenia vs serena & david in the flashback. oh well...keep going.
| Field-Commander chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
i can feel things winding down in this climax. hold nothing back.
| 2nrzone chapter 35 . 7/9/2012
hey atrum! about time u updated instead of taking a year to do it. definitely enjoyed the action as well as the flashback. this point it seems 2 focus more on sailor moon with a bit of pokemon but that's fine. can't wait 4 more!
| ThalieXVII chapter 35 . 7/9/2012
Again I can say your story is well-written and well described.
Nehellenia was annoying with her Good eyes... She's so evil!
When he asked Chaos to show itself Midniteryder was as he is: Impetuous.
Noo the charm!
So David ressurected only to be taken by Chaos... He will be tough to beat and save now...
Can't wait to read the rest!
| Ketchum Teen chapter 35 . 7/8/2012
Good to see the Midniteryder back in action, bad to read that the same evil parasite that possessed Sailor Galaxia deciding to possess him. The Sailor Scouts are sure in for a big one! Can't wait for more!
| DigiPokemaniac chapter 35 . 7/8/2012
glad to c u finally updatin' in less than a year. man, very shocking that chaos came back & took over david's body. also liked the flashback. watched that episode. honestly thought serena/usagi was kinda too soft even though it's part of her personality. update soon, dawg!
| ThalieXVII chapter 34 . 5/23/2012
It's cool that David is finally alive! So he won't possess Davis for the one hundred and thirty-thirth time lol
| ThalieXVII chapter 33 . 5/15/2012
It was really exciting when they were fighting the Digimon Emperor but so sad when it was the time for telling Li's death and all that followed...
Poor David, stuck with all those addictions just because of this thing in his neck and his misfortunes... And he doesn't even know about the thing on his neck... But with the Digimon Emperor I think he will soon find out...
I liked Kari's speech to him, that was so kind...
Return the one wrapped in darkness to his true self... Interesting...
It was funny when Davis noticed David!
A very good chapter!