|Reviews for The Crossroad Odyssey: Memos of the Other Ketchum|
| Major Simius chapter 35 . 7/12/2012
love it, esp. with the return of chaos. wished u finished the confrontation of nehellenia vs serena & david in the flashback. oh well...keep going.
| Field-Commander chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
i can feel things winding down in this climax. hold nothing back.
| 2nrzone chapter 35 . 7/9/2012
hey atrum! about time u updated instead of taking a year to do it. definitely enjoyed the action as well as the flashback. this point it seems 2 focus more on sailor moon with a bit of pokemon but that's fine. can't wait 4 more!
| ThalieXVII chapter 35 . 7/9/2012
Again I can say your story is well-written and well described.
Nehellenia was annoying with her Good eyes... She's so evil!
When he asked Chaos to show itself Midniteryder was as he is: Impetuous.
Noo the charm!
So David ressurected only to be taken by Chaos... He will be tough to beat and save now...
Can't wait to read the rest!
| Ketchum Teen chapter 35 . 7/8/2012
Good to see the Midniteryder back in action, bad to read that the same evil parasite that possessed Sailor Galaxia deciding to possess him. The Sailor Scouts are sure in for a big one! Can't wait for more!
| DigiPokemaniac chapter 35 . 7/8/2012
glad to c u finally updatin' in less than a year. man, very shocking that chaos came back & took over david's body. also liked the flashback. watched that episode. honestly thought serena/usagi was kinda too soft even though it's part of her personality. update soon, dawg!
| ThalieXVII chapter 34 . 5/23/2012
It's cool that David is finally alive! So he won't possess Davis for the one hundred and thirty-thirth time lol
| ThalieXVII chapter 33 . 5/15/2012
It was really exciting when they were fighting the Digimon Emperor but so sad when it was the time for telling Li's death and all that followed...
Poor David, stuck with all those addictions just because of this thing in his neck and his misfortunes... And he doesn't even know about the thing on his neck... But with the Digimon Emperor I think he will soon find out...
I liked Kari's speech to him, that was so kind...
Return the one wrapped in darkness to his true self... Interesting...
It was funny when Davis noticed David!
A very good chapter!
| ThalieXVII chapter 32 . 5/8/2012
I knew Davis would react with the note exchange!
T.Q., T.U... lol T.R... lol again T.3? Now that's anything! lol
Kari is jealous...
The race was fun!
And indeed it must be strange for T.K. that Davis got his name right...
David really doesn't like the new Digidestined...
| ThalieXVII chapter 31 . 5/4/2012
I'm really glad David didn't take the pills while in Tai's body. It's good he thought about that.
Li and David's conversation was interesting. I liked it!
| ThalieXVII chapter 30 . 5/2/2012
I really like all your POV it makes it more emotive and we understand better the characters.
That was good when Ash and Chloe came! The others really needed that!
But it's great that it was Kari/Angewomon that took care of Dragomon!
Gatomon sure have been surprised to see the possession...
| ThalieXVII chapter 29 . 4/28/2012
and was glad that T.P., N.K. or whatever his name was gone lol
David/Davis shrugged. "It'll have to do for the lack of shades lol again
Those dreams are creepy...
Kari must really be scared at all the events...
David's colorful language... Indeed...
That small shroud of darkness is annoying...
| ThalieXVII chapter 28 . 4/16/2012
The mozzarella sticks thing was funny!
The fact that David can possess people is interesting.
Davis is surely annoying...
| ThalieXVII chapter 27 . 4/15/2012
Since the beginning I really like David's relation with Ash. With some competition yet love, it's cute. And the fights were great! There was a lot of things in this chapter. I really like a lot of David's retorts in the story, they are funny!
| ThalieXVII chapter 26 . 4/15/2012
Poor David... addicted to pills... It's strange how people often feel guilty when they left someone else in a bad way and then something happens to them. Like Chloe said it wasn't his fault. That's so great! David will now fight this disgusting monster!