Reviews for Traditional Gift Giving of a Covert Nature
Mark chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
That was so true in characterisation that it felt like part of an episode. I loved the teddy bear pendant. Plus the way you had the two girls tag team Jayne, wonderful writing, thank you. Nice to still find great fanfic of Firefly I haven't read already. MC
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Eeeee! So sweet!
AppleLass chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Adorable! Loved the vernacular, from Jayne's to River's to Kaylee's. And the ending was nice and satisfying.
bellefantastique chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
You write River so so so well! I also love the cuteness! Lovely!
ferociousmope7 chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
so cute.

and i actually detest kaylee/jayne.

but you made me fall for it.

great job.
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
I'll be honest with you, this story made me tear up! it was so sweet and you still reamined to have everyone in character. i always knew jayne could be a sweetie pie!
bookaddict43 chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
I've always loved this story! It's so great to see it again! Where have you been these days? *hugs you tight*
verkisto chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Merry Christmas indeed. Very nice. Thanks.
RionaEire chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Cute story, very well written and a good one at Christmas time. I noticed how you used dialect even when the charactors weren't talking and you did it well, not too much but enough to give it that rustic Firefly energy. You did the charactors right and a Kaylee and Jayne connection makes sense. I like seeing how Jayne thinks of Kaylee here, with reverence, not trying to push himself on her but patient and hoping things will swing his way with kindness of a gift, although he's certainly still gruff Jayne. Well done.

Adverbia chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
aww... that was so sweet. I agree, the voices are well done. :)
fritztheknife chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Great story. I really enjoyed that. I have always known Jayne has a soft spot for Kaylee.

Well done with the language. I find that the most difficult to get right.
Bytemite chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
D'aw, cute.

That really is the perfect Kaylee gift.
jane0904 chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Perfect voices! This Kaylee would find Jayne's gift better than anything Simon could ever give her.