|Reviews for Switch|
| Fleur24 chapter 5 . 10/3/2011
""Then I heard three different oaths, from three separate directions.
From the driveway, Jacob said "'Bout time!"
From the doorway I heard Esme, "Beautiful."
And from inside I heard Carlisle, "Thank God!""
Yep Bella and Edward are back together and have no notion of ever having been with Jasper and Alice.
I'm gald Carlisle took the photo of when they had switched. This is fascinating and intriquing. Wonder what'll happen next.
""Bella looked at me guiltily, "I thought you were angry with me. I'm sorry." I only shook my head in answer, hoping she'd understand I didn't want her to worry about it, as Jasper continued, "I sat in my room and wished that I could do something to alleviate your stress, make you happier. I wished briefly," Jasper looked down for a moment before going on, "that I was your Edward, because you shouldn't feel so anxious all the time.""
""Bella shook her head negatively, looking down in her lap, and Jasper sighed, beginning to stand up. Suddenly Bella gasped and sat up straighter. "Oh Jasper, wait a minute." She looked at me, "I'm sorry Edward, but he's right. I remember, I went downstairs after we fought, and Alice and Jasper were in front of the TV, talking quietly." She looked at Jasper again, "I always look away from you two when you're talking privately, because it always seems too," her cheeks colored beautifully, "intimate." She was quiet for a moment, embarrassed by her own boldness. "I didn't that night though, I watched the two of you, and I thought it would be nice to be calmed for a change. Instead of feeling anxious I thought it would be nice to be Alice, and have Jasper always there to calm me."" That makes sense to me at least. Bella and Jasper wished to be together, so it happened. Wonder why they reverted back?
I rather like Jasper and Bella together.
This was really cool! well done!
| Fleur24 chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
YAY Carlisle's POV! I love hot its called Doctor's notes.
Okay Bella nad Alice screaming! It sounds like Bella and Alice switched bodies or at least places.
Its is really cool and yet really weird!
""I was still in a state of disbelief, but apparently I registered something, because I looked at Jasper, "Where's Edward?"
Jasper pulled his eyes from Bella as though it injured him to do so, and responded, "I imagine in his room with Alice, as usual." In my shock, I believe I did something I have no recollection of ever doing prior to that moment. I felt my jaw drop in surprise."" That's kind of funny, Jasper's jaw dropping.
Hmmmmm This is intriquing. Bella and Jasper really think that they've always been together and that Jasper let Bella instead of Alice.
| Fleur24 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Alice is Litle Miss Muffett and Jasper's the spider!
""It was basely obvious when Jessica developed a crush on him. I love the girl, I'd had a bit of a thing for her since 5th grade, and so I knew her as well as anyone."" OMG this is Mike's POV! This is so cool!
""Jessica once told me that being around Bella felt like walking across sidewalks for her. She said, "You unconsciously steer clear of the cracks, because subconsciously you recognize the void. That's Bella, she's like that void you want to keep away from." It was a rare moment of clarity for Jess. Of course, Bella did crack occasionally, and she would suddenly become visible, but somehow that was worse."" This is actually cool!
I really like Maike's POV, its interesting seeing how he sees things.
""She shot a look at Cullen, frowning, then looked back at me. "What do you mean?" she asked.
"Well, you two have been joined at the hip for ages, and now you're suddenly in here with Jasper Hale. I was just wondering what was going on." Bella looked floored.
"What are you talking about Mike, you know I've always been with Jasper. He took me to the Junior Prom remember."
"No, Bella, you came to the Junior Prom with Edward Cullen, not Jasper." Bella scowled at me, then her face went kind of blank. She raised an eyebrow and grinned.
"Don't be ridiculous Mike, and quit playing games. Next you'll be telling me that you're dating Angela Webber." And she giggled. She had a beautiful laugh."" That is odd!
Bella appears not to remember being with Edward. How odd.
| The Predatory Wasp chapter 5 . 6/28/2009
this was really very interesting.
| peachyoptimism chapter 5 . 4/5/2009
That was a little wierd but good!
| Slywolf9 chapter 5 . 2/15/2009
Fantastic! It was quite hilarious, and I really loved Carlisle's chapter! Wonderful story, always so interesting! How do you do it!
| NanMcCullen chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
That was great! And I absolutely LOVED the last line. Bella always gets her wishes... makes me wish I was Bella!
| NanMcCullen chapter 4 . 1/23/2009
This is so freaking entertaining! I can't wait to see what's really going on!
| NanMcCullen chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
Seth is so funny. I love him to death, and it's funny how he's so amused at the situation Jake will be in now.
| NanMcCullen chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
I'm just as thoroughly confused as they are!
| NanMcCullen chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
That was... unexpected. But I'm intrigued.
| PandasRGOTHPolarBears chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
Woo thats was strange but cool really great story i really liek it !
When I’d finished telling him, Jacob laughed. It was a short bitter laugh, then he said; “That makes sense. I mean - she’s Bella. Bella always gets her wishes.”
| PandasRGOTHPolarBears chapter 4 . 1/3/2009
Jacob is funny !
Bella leaned forward, turning her cheek towards Edward. I growled again, “No! KISS! I’m sure you two remember how. If not, just move towards each other, it’ll come to you.” I smirked, they both glared at me, then they turned to each other, Bella went up on her toes, and Edward leaned down a little. Both closed their eyes just before their lips touched.
“Ew” I said to no one.
| PandasRGOTHPolarBears chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
“I made it with extra meat, for the big animal.” She looked at me appraisingly, and we both laughed.
thats part is so funny !
| PandasRGOTHPolarBears chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
Whats happening its confusing !