|Reviews for In the Whitest Darkness|
| ThexNameless chapter 13 . 6/3/2009
Aww, sweet ending :D
I can't think of anything else to say... except for maybe, why is there only 1 other person who have reviewed your awesomeness? :O
Still, it was lovely
| ThexNameless chapter 11 . 5/31/2009
Nice chappie, though :)
| Marlin Lette chapter 10 . 5/24/2009
The gap between 9 and 10 is a lot. like...the battle, and it's not being there. The part after the battle with what happens to Leon and Axel's return. which I think is an important thing. being that he's Riku's lover. i just think you need another chapter or even another added part to the end of ch 9. because it's something big. Chapter 10 is done well though.
| ThexNameless chapter 10 . 5/22/2009
Umm... I'm getting kinda confused with the story line...
I'll go back and re-read it from the beginning, then I'll probably get it...:)
Nice chappie, though.
| ThexNameless chapter 9 . 5/22/2009
"You're looking as womanly as ever" xD
totally agree with Riku there xD
Two new chappies?
Yay, on to the next one then -
| ThexNameless chapter 8 . 5/3/2009
"But Axel's probably dead by now."
Don't. You. Dare. xD
| ThexNameless chapter 7 . 3/18/2009
Lovely so far.
I'm just gonna say it because it's nagging in the back of my mind: don't kill Axel!
Umm, other than that... Zexy and Dem are engaged!
| Marlin Lette chapter 4 . 1/27/2009
i like it. i think some things need to be expanded upon but i like it.