Reviews for In the Whitest Darkness
Rogue of Dawn chapter 13 . 11/12/2015
It was okay, I agree with the big gap between 9 and 10.

Keep improving!
ThexNameless chapter 13 . 6/3/2009
Aww, sweet ending :D

I can't think of anything else to say... except for maybe, why is there only 1 other person who have reviewed your awesomeness? :O

Still, it was lovely
ThexNameless chapter 11 . 5/31/2009
Oh god...


Axel died

Nice chappie, though :)
Rambling-Rogue chapter 10 . 5/24/2009
The gap between 9 and 10 is a lot. like...the battle, and it's not being there. The part after the battle with what happens to Leon and Axel's return. which I think is an important thing. being that he's Riku's lover. i just think you need another chapter or even another added part to the end of ch 9. because it's something big. Chapter 10 is done well though.
ThexNameless chapter 10 . 5/22/2009
Umm... I'm getting kinda confused with the story line...

I'll go back and re-read it from the beginning, then I'll probably get it...:)

Nice chappie, though.
ThexNameless chapter 9 . 5/22/2009
"You're looking as womanly as ever" xD

totally agree with Riku there xD

Two new chappies?

Yay, on to the next one then -
ThexNameless chapter 8 . 5/3/2009
"But Axel's probably dead by now."

Don't. You. Dare. xD

nice chappie!
ThexNameless chapter 7 . 3/18/2009
Lovely so far.

I'm just gonna say it because it's nagging in the back of my mind: don't kill Axel!

Umm, other than that... Zexy and Dem are engaged!

Rambling-Rogue chapter 4 . 1/27/2009
i like it. i think some things need to be expanded upon but i like it.