|Reviews for Just a little bit of RANDOMNESS, well a lot really|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
Actually, yes it is, you could really turn this into something with a plot.
| dory2o2 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
This one-shot made me laugh! I love it, great job!
| QueenAlla chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Wow, I haven't read a Tamora Pierce book or fanfic in so many years...Missed it. Alanna, my first ever favourite heroine. It's where I got the nickname 'QueenAlla' in fact. Erm, well, enough about me.
Well, with this being a random short one-shot, I guess it's expected to not have much of a plot. It was still entertaining to read, though. I'd love to read the next few chapters-I'm quite a fan of Daine/Numair, so I'll be looking forward to reading more-if you're willing
Criticism...hmm...Well, I'd say maybe save the A/N's until the end, or even the beginning. It tends to get a little bit of a distraction. Though I'm probably just too fussy like that :P
Nice work :)
| Siriusly Duckling chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Randomness, randomness, randomness. But it's GOOD randomness.
Wow 4/7 words are 'randomness' hehe.
Keep going, and come home soon, we'll go to the movies or somethim like that.
| tallonfoot357 chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
good! I thought it was funny, (even though i did not get it, sorry hon)
| Echo Chambers chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
It's probably not worth continuing unless you add detail and plot. There is no scene at all and it's really random and overly dramatic. If you want to have a story about her bad decision to take a boat I'd start over with an intro of the original conversation where she wanted to get to Corus fast - or even before with why she's mad as John - then go to boarding the boat, and then this problem/conversation itself. Just some advise, because you did ask for it. I hope you don't feel that I flamed you, I just wanted to be honest.