Reviews for Heavily Broken
Zelda Zonkk chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
Aw that was so brilliant XD
C Elise chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
very good story
Butterfly in a Hurricane chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
Poor L. I'm feeling so sorry for him it's unbelievable. That's not fair on L.

Raito can be one evil b*d at times, can't he? His arguments do make sense though. The whole "lost faith" bit really spoke out. Typical of us humans. We always hold out, believing something will change. I'm loving the way you tied that in. I'm not a big fan of angst, but I can tell that this is fricking AWESOME!

Atra esterni ono thelduirn

Butterfly
HollyJollyXmas chapter 3 . 12/20/2008
L DON'T YOU DARE KILL YOURSELF!
katakuna95 chapter 2 . 12/19/2008
O.O Wow, this is amazing! But, be sure not to make L too uke-ish, or else it'll be very OOC.
C Elise chapter 2 . 12/19/2008
poor L!
unintelligent-fish chapter 2 . 12/18/2008
BAD LIGHT D
HollyJollyXmas chapter 2 . 12/18/2008
OMG Raito you meanie! I have to say though, I love it when uke L gets tortured by seme Raito.

Please update soon!
HollyJollyXmas chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
L UKE-NESS!

So adorable! I go gaga for this!
C Elise chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
good chapter