Reviews for Orphans
Ayumi chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
Great work! Its amazing how all your stories tap into emotions so easily!

Please update! :3
kenyizsu chapter 6 . 6/16/2011
The third paragraph? One of them is The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, right? :D
Yoru Hana1 chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Remember Eject, "What ever you do today, you have to sleep with tonight."
SlipknotGhidorah chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Nice chapter. I wonder what will happen to Rumble now since the Autobots found him. Anyway, for the references, are they Power Rangers and Doctor Who?
Lunar Mist chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Aww! Poor Rumble! He's still a youngling! Poor little cassette! Help him, Eject!
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Schwertlilie81 chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
Youre doing really great.

Your characterisations are convincing and the plot is well thought through. I absolutly admire your take on of this special Characterdeath and how this affects his cassettes and other transformers.

I look absolutly forwards to:

What happens at the Decepticon Base? How are the remaining sibblings?

Whats up with Ravage?

And especially what going to happennext with rumble?
Salokin Semaj chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
I vote the cassettes are taken in. By blaster. And live happy. And get along. Please? Late B-day present for me?
The Beckster chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Ah! No cliffhangers! I gotta know what happens! Regardless of very minor grammatical errors which can easily be fixed when you're not tired, this chapter was great! I can't wait for more.

But the shows in the 3rd paragraph ... I think I know almost all of them. Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (btw 42), Unicron and Transformers the Movie, Stargate whatever (never watched the shows, but I saw enough of the commercials to give me a basic gist), I have no clue which specific 3 universal wars you could be referencing (one possibly Star Wars?), nor the death of the first sun and first race, I know I've heard of the turtle with the world on it's back, the myth is twisted and told so many different ways, and the time traveler is Dr. Who.

XspriteyX chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Noooooeessss! You're meant to be the good guys! Ya can't kill Rumble when he's so spark broken!

Please ya gotta update soon!
Cyberbee15 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Thanks for the new chapter and please let rumble,his siblings and soundwave live please!
Metalchick36 chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Oh man! this story is so sad I am actually crying! I really feel bad for the cassettes! I hope that Blaster takes them in, but that would probably take a lot to convince all the siblings. Hope you update soon! Keep up the good work.
GunnyMollie chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
omg poor rumble i feel for him please update soon [you should you left us with a cliffy slgger [kidding]]
Ashana chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Evil, evil writer! The best writers can always do the most superb cliff hangers, and you are no exception! I hope you are able to update soon - I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to see Rumble welcomed into the Autobots! Thanks for the chapter!
Kick-Aft chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
... wow. never expected that. good job.
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