Reviews for The Misfits
KennyGant7865 chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
Wow looks like their quite open minded. The Ecclesiarchy is really corrupt and fanatical while the imperium really is falling
Kit chapter 68 . 3/14/2013
Words can not describe how amazing this story is. When you complete it, if you made a book out of it, then I would buy the book just so I could read it again and again. I am telling the truth about the book thing, this is so good it is even better than a couple black library books I've read! This is an epic work of words!
Morwen Tindomerel chapter 68 . 2/20/2013
I hope someday you get back to this - but believe me I know what it is to have my inspiration dry up!

In the meantime I have this fantasy of Alaster ending up Ravenlord someday with Patraeus as his Master Librarian and Nasty leading the First Company.
Yoholic chapter 21 . 2/17/2013
Love this story, though it might be me but the gene seeds procedure seemed off
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 18 . 2/15/2013
Didn't like this chapter... too many wild theories there, and the character who says these is too well-informed and too chatty even for "Space marines are allowed".

For one Psykers could be a response to increase in psychic activities in the warp that heralded birth of Slaanesh. In other words humanity was forced to develop psychic abilities to cope with it. The same thing that led to Ogryns and Ratlings, only in galactic scales.

Also while the Emperor DID use ancient methods to enhance his Super-Warriors, the core of Astartes program was unmatched creatures Primarchs, which were source of the enhancements.

Another thing is that Geneseed is just about the last implant that is added to the mix, so all the fuzz about it is kind of uncalled for (after all between the first organ and the 19th there's at least a year of distance). And I've heard geneseed can technically be removed after 5-10 years (based on which one) while the Marine is still alive.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
Smart.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 8 . 2/15/2013
Well aren't they the trouble magnets?
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
Or genestealer cultists... they ARE rather smart (more so than I usually consider them to be) and with a Hive Fleet approaching the timing seems just about tight for a sudden rebellion.

Alaster is the visionary type, and if he survives (which he would, most likely) and his ideals survive (possible) he can become next big thing that happened since foundation of Chapter. If I put it in Star wars way, he can easily become Darth Revan who brought down republic to its knees or or Revan the unorthodox Jedi who saved Republic thrice over.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 6 . 2/14/2013
This stanks of Chaos, either smart planning type like Alpha Legion, or a cult of Tzeentch. They knew about Marines schedule and staged this not with aim of killing aspirants (because honestly? A single Astartes was more than enough to handle them) but to paint Space Marines in bad light as oppressors and slayers of faithful. A way of ensuring that the next mob would be led by Righteous Pious rather than drug addled minds.

The Imperial law will see to the rest. Also isn't attacking armed forces of the Imperium an act of heresy?
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 4 . 2/14/2013
This is indeed a good story (and this far better than that frankly boring new Imperial Fist story as far as boring-o-meter goes). I do believe Patreus might turn out to be a Psyker in future though.
The-Original-Unknown chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
good story but you are not representing the space marines in the grim dark nature enough.
Slothman30 chapter 68 . 1/24/2013
This has been the 4th time reading this story just like how it flows its different to any other just so dam good. Really hope an update is coming soon.
Raigel chapter 68 . 1/18/2013
hello, nice story...

finally i can see some marine who didn't have his brain turned to goo by the geneseed...

and then i notice you haven't updated in a very big while...

if you abandoned it or it's on hiatus you could at least tell your readers...

hope to see from you soon...

bye.
awilla the hun chapter 31 . 1/13/2013
I've spent too long reading this when I should be revising. Damn you for distracting me! But this is excellent stuff, an awful lot better than a lot of Black Library. I prefer my 41st millenium more crusty, with Tech Priests' prayers being meaningful, everything a bit more backward, the Space Marines gigantic inhuman juggernauts of death in contrast to the mortals scuttling around them, and so on (and your Marines do seem a little 'weak' at times), but this is a refreshingly 'modern', human take on it. Well characterised, well plotted, etc. Keep writing!

Now, only thirty plus chapters to go...
Cormalindo chapter 18 . 12/16/2012
I enjoyed this so far. I found Kelso's theories interesting. Your writing is good.

My only problem is that the characters are to reasonable and not GRIMDARK enough. But I find the writing to be good enough to not care much about that. Thank you for writing.
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