|Reviews for Newborn|
| David chapter 16 . 4/17/2014
The treaty between the vamps and wolves, must have been worded in such a way as to NOT require the Cullens to keep other vamps off la push. The alternative is obviously infeasible, this chapter gives a good example. It may be that it would be difficult to get her included in the treaty later as she had entered their territory, but what is done here cannot be right.
| Guest chapter 45 . 1/2/2014
that's so sad... bella can't just die! it still is a perfect story and i always have thought happy ending are cliche but this is just...*sobs*
| WHAT THE FUCK chapter 45 . 5/30/2013
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII FUCKING HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU KILL BELLA? YOU FUCKING BITCH REVIVE HER FOR GODS SAE FUCKING DO IT!WORST STORY EVER YOU LITTLE BITCH I HATE YOU I HATE YOU IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII HATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUFF FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC CKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKYOU YOU BITCH I WILL HATYE YOU FOREVER FOREVER HOW COULD YOU FUCKING KILL BELLA? KISS YOUR DREAMS GOODBYE NO ONE WILL EVER READ YOUR STORIES IF THEY ARE SOOOOOOOOOOO FFFFFFUCKING DDDDDDDDDDDDDEPRESSING! YOU LITTLE FUCKING BITCCH GO BURN IN FUCKING HELL NO NO GO ROT IN IT FOR ETERNITY I HATE YOU SOO FUCKING MUCH!
| PLEASE READ chapter 36 . 5/30/2013
I love your writing so much usually the stories aren't that imaginative and I give up on them because the writing is terrible too but this is great! ive never read one in this situation before and usually Edward and Bella fall in love the second they meet each other so I like the fact they didn't and I got too see both their perspectives.
but I will give up on this story if its too long so please try to finish it or at least end the story so their happy so there is nothing wrong for the sequel otherwise I will be sad face a lot. I don't like really long stories and I can NEVER find the sequel because I cant follow so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE just put a link at the end or at least tell me what the name is so I can find it.
lov u's xxx
Zoe H J
PS: I would make an accout thing but I don't have an E-mail so I cant and I'm sorry about that I really lov your writing but I cant follow! sad face x1000
| Jazzy286 chapter 45 . 4/3/2013
I winced when bella got her limbs torn off. I was like : That has got to hurt.
| Guest chapter 45 . 2/19/2013
u should of kept bella alive
| Guest chapter 45 . 9/6/2012
Please finish it, this story is so awesome with all of the killings and things. Wouldn't it be strange if Jane and Alec were actually Bella's sibling. That would have been a twist wouldn't it?
| Go Team Jasper Twilight Rocks chapter 23 . 9/1/2012
| JustaReader chapter 22 . 8/10/2012
Bleh...bella runs away...to much
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 45 . 7/6/2012
This is a good story
| Guest chapter 44 . 4/23/2012
O come on I spent all day reading this and you end it like this my first note is it had to much drama one after another after another give us time to digest it I thought it was good in the beginning for the most part.
| BlackMoon29 chapter 31 . 3/2/2012
Like your story; but my god, is Bella retarded? Why is she so pathetic. It's all "poor me" "ive ruined everything". boo freeakin hoo
| RozalittleDhampir chapter 4 . 12/6/2011
wow...this is so imaginative:)this is a one of a kind story:)
| twilove chapter 23 . 5/23/2011
OMG... Bella never killed. sorry don't like that part
| i hate u chapter 45 . 4/19/2011
o god u fucking can u killed bella