|Reviews for Eternal Return|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8
Fantastic, I believe this is the third time I've read it but I've never reviewed. Magnificent, I very much enjoyed the scene in the graveyard this time, Harrymort's frustration at his fourteen year old self as he 'teaches' him to fight was really quite brilliant, and the laughter as Lily dies, too, superb.
Very well done, one of my favourite HP one-shots.
| Azerjaban chapter 1 . 3/3
What a delightfully dark story! That is a horrible circle, I'm curios to why Harry /Voldemort does not just break it? And kill himself?
| SapphyreMyst chapter 1 . 3/2
Oh my god again?
| acrimony1029341 chapter 1 . 2/17
Just as good asthenia first time I read it. An excellent story with a chilling plot.
| DeengoBlue chapter 1 . 1/18
Very well done.
| Coline7373 chapter 1 . 1/17
| TamariChan chapter 1 . 1/8
Horrific and beautiful and so, so sad. This is an amazing work.
| SilveredFoxeh chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Oh *shudders* This was spectacular.
The part that seemed truly horrific to me was being able to SEE that it was all some type of time loop, to suspect that all along this had happened before, and he was just bringing events back to the beginning, to doom the very person he's going through all of this to try and save, to the same fate he has just experienced, and has no idea.
And to people thinking he might break out of his loop eventually, I don't think he would - As long as he's himself, and events follow the path they did time and again, he'll simply keep doing the same things, never knowing, and never suspecting that things SHOULD be different, or that they can, and so it's a never ending nightmare.
Neither shall live while the other survives indeed. A cycle of misery and cruel hope as you watch him crushed more and more only to find out he's done it all to himself. But what if Hermione was right? Horrendous as it is, what WOULD have happened if the formula deviated? And he didn't kill himself, or was the master of death would time break? What would happen to the harry who's lived and become Voldemort, and the timeline?
You wrote an amazing tale, and I've been reading some of your other stories recently and they are all amazing.
Also the power of that last line showing that the beginning of this story was really just the end of the very work that we had just read, that could be read over and over again... *shudders* Amazing. I have to recommend this to some other people. (also in a different take I loved your Hufflepuff Tom, but have yet to leave a review) I feel like everyone should read that one XD And this one. And just wow. It's nice to be blown away, even if it's by a nightmare like this one (which this certainly is) Kudos and I look forward to reading your other works, and your future projects!
| Sammy-A.M chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Such a fate is so horrible. I for sure start crying now... T_T
And it gives a lot to think and speculate about...
nice done :)
| Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
| Tommy14 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
I enjoyed reading this sad but wonderful tale.
| LilithL2 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
it's horrifing and amazing at the same time...
i can't really understand how could you think about something like this.. but congratulations you are a hell of a writer! ;)
| WeirdCornChip chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I think my brain just sneezed.
| KonohasBlackReaper chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
| AKDeathScourge chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Was there ever a Lord Voldemort? Or was it Harry Potter the entire time?