Reviews for Eternal Return |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow... this is really good, but very disturbing and tragic. there's so much emotion in it... love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gods, it makes so much sense- there never was a Voldemort. Beautiful and grotesque, thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that was so horribly sad. And it made so much sense. Tragic, really. I loved it so much. I feel like crying. This was perfect. Just...perfect. Thank you for writing this. -Lyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... ... Wow. I mean, WOW. That was so... powerful. Intense. There was so much emotion, just reading it gave me the shivers. I love the concept, that Harry Potter must live the life of Tom Riddle and Lord Voldemort in order to keep History on track, live with murder and hate and self-loathing, and play his part in order to shape history in the way he remembers it should go. For the Greater Good. I love it, I really do. it's very human, very sad and very unique. Many other stories would have had Harry-as-Tom changing the future with about as much tact as a rampaging elephant in a cornfield, but not this one. I don't know how to express just how much I adore this fic, so I'll stop now or ramble on forever. I would like to mention that I would be completely willing to do a quickie-Beta on this fic just to catch all the typos. PM me if you want me to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely stunning and amazing. It really gives a new perspective on Harry and the person he would become, as well as the man Tom Riddle once was. Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my. This is intense. And. so. *_* I lack the words. Thank you for sharing this - it's amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...my...God. This is absolutely *chilling*, it's something I've never thought about, but now I can't stop because it would make SENSE if this happened, and it's so bloody SAD because it's a vicious cycle. Harry's locked in this neverending loop, over and over and over, never knowing that everything he's done as Voldemort meant nothing because history repeats itself. Left me a little numb at the end, especially the last line. You're just as good with HP as DN, and I can't wait for what you write next. ~ Compy PS - Voldy x Bella ftw. x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is just too cruel. But awesome. Really, that's great. I would like to read some more stories from you. Merry upcoming Christmas! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was creepy. Kind of reminded me of a story called 'Orobouros' in the Inu Yasha category. It's a one shot about Naraku and Kagome so be warned if you like Inu Yasha and decide to read it. You have a good writing style. I didn't catch any grammar errors either but I've never been good at English so don't take it to seriously. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was incredible. Truly. It was well written and seemed to flow very well and the emotions and explanations behind it were beautifully done. It's a great twist on the usual, done-too-many-times-before time travel ideas and you kept it very realistic as well. -S.R. |
![]() ![]() ![]() doesn't really make sense at the end. Surely if Harry is Tom Riddle/Voldemort, he'd remember what had happened in his previous life, and the one before that, therefore he wouldn't do his life all over again. A nice story, but flawed at its most basic element. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disturbing in its implications but beautifully written. You really touched upon the frenetic justification Harry keeps telling himself, all the while trying to distinguish between himself and Voldemort's body until he can't anymore. Rinse, repeat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. |