Reviews for The Accidental Kiss
pippapear chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Hey Beth.

Very nicely done.

I like the ooc yet ic Edward. Gotta love that southern charm.

& enjoyed Rosalie's influence in this tale.


Looking forward to the oneshot & SM update!

Cheers again.


CallistoLexx chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Oh, they're going to be in Smut Sundays? Wonderful.

I truly did love this story. They really are sweet, all else aside.
CallistoLexx chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
I have to say, I still love Edward's line. "I hardly tripped and fell and kissed you. I did it pretty deliberately." That's great.
Cristygen chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Aw! That was such a cute little story!

Thank you and Alaskangirl for publishing it!

Happy New Year!
robsmom chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Oh this is co good thank you for sharing...Have a Happy New Year
Sheeijan chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
Aw, poor Rosalie! I can totally understand her insecurity all things considered. I mean, the amount of temptation thrown at guys like Emmett is ridiculous. Anyway, I loved that Edward was stalking Bella and got called out on it. And I'm glad that Bella didn't fight Edward on the whole getting to know you thing.
jimemon chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Great story! Happy New Year to you too :)
ObsessingOverEdward chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Glad to see Em and Rorse patch things up.

Thanks for sharing!
Muff'Nbutter chapter 5 . 12/31/2008

I loved the Pride and Prejudice reference with Edward calling himself an "unmitigated ass" hahaha

This truly was wonderful.

And I really love accidental kisses. They're the best kind to write about! hahaha

Thanks for writing this, and thanks to alaskangirl for beating me in the auction because this was amazing! lol
Smiles4Twilight chapter 5 . 12/31/2008
Aww... this chapter is so sweet! I love how you didnt introduce Rosalie as this superslut whore or something like that. Instead, you brought her in as this broken puzzel piece... I know really corny but seriously. I think it makes the story all the better :D
Tiggrmommi chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
Aw loved it! Perfection. Totes awesomeness! All win. Can't wait for the SM one-shot! Happy New Year BB!
Muff'Nbutter chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
I loved the bit with Rose. How even though her issue with Emmett were real, talking abot trust being important with love was a lead up to what Edward asked Bella... and it was very Aladdin. I'm expecting a magic cazrpet ride in the next chapter! lol
Melolabel chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
Very cute. So that's pretty much the ending? besides the extra? Short, but good!
emillythestrange chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
aww...that's the last chapter? you should write more...i absolutely love this story! *sob* oh well. i loved it and i love it and i hope you update smut mondays soon!
WhoDatWTF chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
Aw indeed!

Two updates in one day? Love it!

That "unmitigated ass" line was great...I'm completely in love with Pride and Prejudice...

I love that Edward talked to Rosalie about what Bella had told her...and then admitted to doing the same thing, not trusting. Just what I was thinking last chapter...

It may be a bit stalkerish, but I loved how Edward waited for Bella at her home to apologize for not trusting her.

I've absolutely loved this novella. Best 5 chapter story I've ever read! You took an idea that could be made into a huge, 20-chapter story and condensed it down into 10,0 words without losing a bit! Incredible!

Thanks for not resisting and posting today instead of Friday! Can't wait for the SM extra!
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