|Reviews for Dimensional Rift|
| AyumiUK chapter 6 . 7/11/2016
Rather liked not knowing or knowing?
Despite the being the...
Egged on (by?) a certain...
One that merited mental strain?
Impossible longGotta love Ratatosk's impulsive ways. And he's like, chill.
Well, Emil was always the fretter...
| AyumiUK chapter 5 . 7/11/2016
Oh my gods. Fangirl goggles won't come off. Sniff.
Or was it intentional? o.o
in that case, carry on...
In another world, Jade sneezed.
The bath scene felt like a skit.
Also, feels. so many feels all around. TTwTT
| AyumiUK chapter 4 . 7/11/2016
My ToSDotN headcanon: Ratatosk took over Aster's body, so he's in there somewhere.
Emil likes Richter, who likes Aster, whose body was taken by Ratatosk, who likes Marta, who likes Emil, who is utterly confused. It's a circle!
So, any permutation of that is awesome (except, perhaps, for Emil likes Aster, who likes Marta, whose body was taken by Richter(!), who likes Ratatosk, who likes Emil, who's utterly confused by this self-cest times three, but rolls with it anyway?)
Haha, the implications of two Ratatosks...
And Aster heard the monologue?
Waaait, does that mean Aster knows about the time travel? o.o
(I went back and reread only the spoken parts just to make sure)
Oh, the theories get more and more outlandish.
...Tethe'Alla bridge, his heart... (shot)
I get shipper-on-deck vibes from Kate? what.
| AyumiUK chapter 3 . 7/11/2016
Ohaha, they are on completely different mind waves. XD
He's like, this kid's still high on tranquilisers (i hope).
Rilena's as well (,) as hers was...
Rhe body sharing thing probably makes him look like a wacko for those who don't know him... XD
Wait. 4016. That would mean... Kratos was 4044. What an unlucky age! (how the heck my brain jumped to that is anyone's guess...)
...has anyone ever counted how many times Emil apologised? I mean, the only one who beats him is Colette, I think...
| AyumiUK chapter 2 . 7/11/2016
In the manga, it's implied Richter's perpetual scowl was caused by poor eyesight and constant squinting.
And then, when he got glasses, because he refused to change them to the correct prescription...
So, even if they weren't enemies by that point, Emil would most likely freak out if super-scary-Richter pointed a needle at him, while he's bound in a dungeon... waitaminute. why, brain.
| AyumiUK chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
Hm, the bridge is powered by 3k exspheres, not 10k. Although... the number of victims could be much, much higher, considering so many die before they're complete.
Third reread, I think. As in, probably the fourth time I'm reading this. Apparently, I never reviewed (or did so anonymously), so I figured better later than never. This fic has so much awesome.
He left the library, emerged into... (I think it's missing an "and"?)
Instantly (,) Aster knew...
I love how you shaped Aster's personality. His scholarly pride, and curiosity in the first chapter, his playfulness, camaraderie...
Like, this became my Aster headcanon.
| kat1316 chapter 20 . 3/1/2016
great story wish it was updated though :(
| werehogdog chapter 18 . 12/28/2015
The end of this chapter was perfect. I like how it looks like Aster is trying to get Richter and Emil together.
| Chibiabyss chapter 21 . 8/31/2015
this is awesome
| Alkaru chapter 21 . 3/9/2015
Thank you for writing this beautiful story. I find that you write the thought processes and actions of the characters very, well, in character, as well as being realistic and believable. You pay attention to the finer details of the plot (which is very engaging and dramatic, in a good sense) and there honestly are only a few, almost unnoticeable plot holes.
Ratatosk and Emil seem to get along much better than they do in-game, though that is understandable, as they were about to spend eternity in each others' company anyway and likely would have gotten over their differences. Also, Aster actually fights with a gun in the manga, but I find the idea of him using Marta's spinner very appealing xD
I know I am speaking for many others when I say I truly enjoyed reading your story. I understand that writing is not your first priority, but I hope that you'll be able to update this again, and we readers will all be waiting patiently for that day :)
| CrazyCartoonistOtaku chapter 21 . 3/9/2015
It's been almost four whole years...but to heck with this. This story is so good, it will be worth the wait.
| Rune chapter 21 . 11/6/2014
Tenebrae why? I mean I know why but still. It does make me kinda sad that that's the case. I suppose traveling with Marta for so long helped with his snarky personality in the game.
Please continue this. This plot point is pretty good and I feel like it never gets finished when someone tries to use it.
| FierceLink chapter 21 . 3/18/2014
Please update this when you can. Really love the story and I am eagerly awaiting for this to continue.
| StarTrail chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
so i really like this story! i mean, there arent that many like it at all lol
| StarTrail chapter 10 . 8/19/2013
lol i think they're Entelexia...umm, spellcheck?