Reviews for Fate's Play |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh the poor thing! is that neclace going to make them realise they're in love? syaoran... how come he can see her true self in that carnival but not in the real world? |
![]() ![]() ![]() they'll meet eachother right? but how's it going to work out if they forget? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh the poor girl! syaoran... idiot... how can he not see her acting? she's really bad at excusses... or maybe he does see it but doesnt want to admit? |
![]() ![]() omg 'vladimir' hm...i think its really li but hes in a relatoinship already hm... wel iz this a meili i mean u are 1 of my favorit authorz realy no lying soo... pweas continu kay?aloha,ja ne,buh-bye - |
![]() ![]() Hello! I happened to find your story just a couple of days ago. I have to say, its very well written! Not only the grammar, no... the characters and their personalities. Meiling seems so real, and you make us feel relly sorry for her. Although some hints of the story may be very obvious, some are a real mistery (I would be more specific, but I dont wanna put spoilers on your review screen). The Carnival scene was well described, and I swear I imagined the Hall -I hope I had imagine something similar to your idea-, but Meiling was a little aggresive with Vincent, dont you think? -very funny, though-. Only one question: why was he there? In general, I can say reading your fic has been a very satisfying experience. Hope you can finish it. (By the way, I just loved Meilings inside thoughts on chapter 1. She is still Meiling but in a teenager way.) There. I hope this is kind of the review you were expecting. Good Luck! Bye! |
![]() ![]() i love it i love it i love it please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Who will Meiling end up with? I love MeiLi but I think I like this 'Vladimir' guy. O.o But any ways, what will happen if Syaoran found out that she went to the ball? And continue writing MeiLi fics cuz there's only a few out there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is really good. IT's really sweet! _ I really like it and you better be planning the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOO! I loveved it! PLZ CONTINUE some how! I loved it i want more! PLZ, and maybe sometime you could read my story as well. BUT PLZ CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *jumps up and down* ME LIKES! ME LIKES! And even though I just read the 1st chapter, I think that this fic will turn out great, just like the rest of your fanfics! Remember, you're a great author no matter what other people say! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh. sorry about the double review! It seems I double clicked on it twice. sorry again! oh btw again, love the fic, keep it up/going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy ****. o_o Write more soon. PLEASE. That was soooo good. _ I loved this! :D Favorite Stories is where this is going. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy ****. o_o Write more soon. PLEASE. That was soooo good. _ I loved this! :D Favorite Stories is where this is going. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! Plz write more this is one of the best meili iv read |
![]() ![]() OH! I spend forever and a day looking for your story. I read a bit, liked it a LOT, and then forgot who it was by and what it was called. It was worth the wait! I really do like it, and hope the next chapter is as good. :-D |