Love the story! Wow, I don't know if you're still working on this, but I hope you are!

You must write more. I love it. I love how you took the pov of writer and muse, it is a very original concept. And then make it a parody of the story. Of course I liked the Sigurd chapter because I am a big Sigurd X Hyuga shipper. Keep up the good work.

Ahh! This is the most immensely amusing yaoi fic and Citan fic and well... just good fic in general. His commentary during the fic is also great. But... I *really* wish that it would be updated like... in the near future would be helpful. :)

This is cool!

Heeehehehehe! Sigurd's funny when he's drunk off his ass!

Oh my god! I'm usually totally anti-yaoi, and I am in love with Citan and Jessie and Siggy and ... well ... everyone but Fei and usually yaoi suxorz l337ly but this is GREAT! You captured the personalities of the characters excellently! Oh wow *starry eyed* can I worship you?

Great story, I love Citan's comments. Keep it up. Hope you feel better. Hope this is of some kind of help, this is my first time I've wrote a review.

My apologies, I'm going to be a bit late in updates. Bad case of flu is keeping me pretty much in bed and unable to think too much. I'll update the minute I'm feeling better.

you must continue! you must, it's got Hyu as the amazing reversible!

Lmao! Oh this is so cool! _ Write some more and don't

listen to Hyuga, you're doing a great job! heh heh...

*crazy giggle* this is awesome thus far, you must continue. Poor Hyu and his state of XG manslutdom.