Reviews for Broken
jk chapter 8 . 1/19/2016
did you seriously brand name drop? wooooowwww now we all know that this story was written by someone really fucking phat...LOL fucktard
jk chapter 7 . 1/19/2016
it was really hard to read epov..that he likes her. after all the nasty shit you wrote james doing I just cant see her as a sexual being, plus shes too young, and its just gross now.
and why in the fuck did alice never see bella before? why 11 years after she was kidnapped...because james was gonna kill her, yes I get that but surely since shes supposedly edwrds mate she would have seen her get kidnapped...alice gets visions that barely matter soooo why not of important things like her brothers mates mother being killed!
jk chapter 6 . 1/19/2016
did you have to have james to that shit to her? I don't think that "added" anything to the story you sicko!

plus james has a mate! mate is supposed to mean something yes?
jk chapter 5 . 1/19/2016
her dream angel? are you fucking serious with this shit?
and having her sleep walk to him calling his name?

jesus can you not make this more believable and less pathetic?

well shes been with james since she was five shes gotta be dumber then a box of rocks
luvyateamedward chapter 19 . 7/28/2015
Great story! Thanks for sharing.
Ali chapter 8 . 7/19/2015
Its a good story but you made Bella to sane, she shouldn't have had rational thoughts and been more feral.
British Queen chapter 7 . 1/2/2015
The Princess Bride, yeah? I watch that on the telly all the timem
BoogieJo78 chapter 17 . 11/16/2014
Loved it!
dwright chapter 17 . 7/18/2014
Loved it. Thanks for writing.
dwright chapter 14 . 7/17/2014
I love your Rose!
Toni Masen chapter 17 . 1/29/2014
Wow, a very fantastical fantasy. You had some very interesting ideas. :-)
Golden Eyed Writer chapter 17 . 8/19/2013
That was a really nice story. Good job! :)

Golden Eyed Writer
Syndi-Dowell chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
Very ineresting story. :)
EmziBob chapter 17 . 4/29/2013
Amazing, Awesome, Superb, Brilliant... Getting the picture here? I loved it!
happy.ala chapter 9 . 4/15/2013
Great chapter.
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