|Reviews for Sunrise|
| mother-of-two chapter 13 . 7/2/2009
awful, stupid, not intact, sorry
| lynettecullen chapter 13 . 5/31/2009
That was a REALLY REALLY GREAT story!
I LOVED it!
| AnmlLvr chapter 10 . 1/17/2009
Hey, could you try to repost chapter 9? I couldn't view it, no matter how many times I refreshed or reopened the internet. Please?
| AsterEris chapter 13 . 1/15/2009
Absolutely...completely...AMAZING. I just read the whole entire thing in less than 20 minutes when I should be doing homework! I can barely express the incredible wonderfulness of this story. There aren't words. Well, there are words, I suppose, but...anyway. Really, really, reallyreallyreallyreally great. Every character is perfect, you kept to the book almost exactly, and the writing was...dare I say it...fantabulous! (That word has been on the tip of my tongue for so long and now I've finally found an appropriate place to use it! Hooray!) I always wondered what they'd tell Renee, and this is excellent. Not to mention the introduction of REAL werewolves, which I thought was quite interesting. Even though it's too late now to change them, the few criticisms I have (since the people tell me they're rewarding...0.o) are:
I thought that in the books it said that REAL werewolves were more European creatures, since that was what Vladimir and Whatshisface, the two Romanian vampires, were hunting. But I suppose it doesn't really matter, they could have taken a plane. :P
I thought that maybe a teensy bit more of description would have been useful, such as the rooms they were standing in and what the yard looked like as they chased the werewolves. However, the people descriptions were excellent.
Um...I had one other one but it just slipped my mind, so I'm done. CRAZY-AWESOME story. Oh, and thanks for being one of the only (*sob*) reviewers of my story, Blind Faith. It really (*sob*) means a lot! (*sob*) But no really, thanks, I appreciate the feedback. :P
And I just realized that's probably one the longest reviews I've written in my entire life. Feel special? Haha :P
| natasha cullen chapter 13 . 1/14/2009
a great ending to a great story is what i think!
| kalz chapter 13 . 1/12/2009
wow this is extremely good for lyk a person that didn't write the whole story
u write just lyk stepahnie meyer...love it soo much
ur a genius...cant wait to meet u
| ClamKidToTheRescue chapter 13 . 1/11/2009
| Rahma chapter 13 . 1/11/2009
i love it but that's not fair! you gave us an ending that was satisfying enough.. but now you end it like this! :'(
| gkjfhfkhd chapter 13 . 1/10/2009
aww! i really REALLY think u should continue this story :(
n e ways, if u dont, its really good (:
| A is for Angel chapter 13 . 1/10/2009
| A is for Angel chapter 12 . 1/10/2009
| ifurcutesitbyme chapter 12 . 1/10/2009
good... but weird...
| dream0utloud27 chapter 12 . 1/10/2009
wow! this story is amazing...keep writing! i cant wait until your next chapter comes out!
| ClamKidToTheRescue chapter 12 . 1/10/2009
good chapter. i think you got Renee's pov well!
| gkjfhfkhd chapter 12 . 1/10/2009
its great! :D