Reviews for Broken
Damej chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Oops never mind it was a T rating... Sorry.

Nice work anyway.
Damej chapter 1 . 7/24/2010

Nice characterization but I don't see where the R rating comes in.

walkingwithdeathnotes chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Through John’s entire life he has really ever known the world that his mother had given him. He hasn’t known much outside of it, nothing except the rules and messages that she has drilled into him since he can remember. So when Derek appears it is like a breath of air. Something in him stirs that he can’t quite name and it makes him feel, it just makes him feel.

omg :)

i love your present tense style :D it's aweshum :D

Nothing his mother taught him could ever prepare John for what he is facing. Nothing Derek ever told him could prepare him for what he is seeing. Here, at the brink of the end of mankind, John is still learning. The numbers are few and barely anyone to help them, but they fight anyway, because fighting distracts you. Survival is the key and the sounds of machines walking, the ground shaking and touches at the dead of night, is the only way to keep the pain away. Even for the short while it lasts.

Lovely, touching ending.

and the lyrics really matched

amazingness :D

love it (:

keep it up :D

izzy xx
DementedViper chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I LOVE! i dont even watch the damn thing but I LOVE!