|Reviews for Apologia|
| kittykatloren chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Another really fantastic story. I do love Lehran and Sanaki. Your details and characterization are impeccable.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
It is ok, but I do find it a bit disturbing that this is essentially incest, with Lehran being Sanaki's ancestor.
I also noticed a minor typo, near the end of the story, where Sanaki says:
“You work begins now. I expect your humble obedience to my every command,” she said, but it was more a raspy purr than an order.
You are missing the 'r' at the end of the first word in that line.
It is quite detailed, and I hope you continue to write, because I know that people will improve.
| Myaru chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
I know I've already told you how much I love you for this fic, but it doesn't hurt to say so again~! It makes me fangirl so hard to see my favorite pairing in someone else's voice.
"It came on perfumed lettering from her own desk." - I don't remember if I said anything about this before, but it's a really nice detail, more subtle than the scarlet draping (though I love that so, so much). It's funny, because a letter is probably something she didn't send to him that often (they were either always in close proximity, or if he was traveling, where would she send it? etc.) but I bet it would bring up all sorts of memories for him with things like handwriting (teaching Sanaki to write must've been um, an epic task) and the mysterious scent. Does it smell like her? :D
"She seated herself on the bed, a large four poster creation set in scarlet."
I also like that she does that, instead of sitting in a chair, because it's kind of suggestive but not really. Lehran is the one "fairly innocent" in this story, clearly. XD
"...but instead she pulled on it and forced him to bend until her lips met his."
Love love love. He had better bend for his empere- that sounds kind of wrong, doesn't it.
Thank you so much~!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 12/20/2008