Reviews for 4th Month Anniversary
Tatiana Clair chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
I really loved this story of yours its adorable :)
allaroundfanofalmosteverything chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
they're a bit young to be proposing, and not far enough in their relationship yet, they should have waited a couple more months, and with the young thing, they're still in Jr. High. but otherwise I loved it.
Anonymas chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Great story! Though, personally, I think they said 'I love you' a bit too many times. Other than that, awesome work!
Cakedecorator chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
AW! KAWAII-DESU! I never thought this would happen! I mean, it's a mermaid thing, am I right?
Mubiana chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Hi lucia,how is home?

Is that a yes or a yes?
amy chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
the story has too much " i love u".

but love the way u put the feelings

VERY detailed

i love it!

Mic chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
that was so cute. you should do another one but with them as parents .
Ell4 chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Very cute. _ Great work!
The Perks of Being Ashley chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Whatever07 chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Your plot is really nice...

I love it...

but may I suggest/advice one thing about this?

If ever you'll revise this fic...

can you put some ,more adjectives...

and please don't do it in a dialogue form...

(narrative will be much better)

just a suggestion/advice though...

:) i love it...
Shelbi chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
OHEMMGE That was super cute but now u should make their wedding and make that super cute too! ROFLMAO Anyways keep writing stories i bet they'll all come out super cute!
AYUMU10 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
-just passin' by-...




Merry Xmas!
animelvr23 chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
aww! i started crying at the end! that was so beautiful! favorite!
PinkAngelWings chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
aww.. short and sweet is all i have to say :) and Merry Christmas to you to :)