|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| MyOwnWorstCritic chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
oh man, poor them. There is seriously something in the universe against them!
| gypsyrose06 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
A sweet proposal and Macs response was too cute. No someone already asked me!
| achaon chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Good second chapter. You must not have figured out the system to add chapters. I had a similar problem several years ago. I had the whole story (Commitment) written, so I revised the first chapter and re-posted the whole story as one chapter. Never did figure it out. I never did post another multi-chapter story after that.