|Reviews for A Hypnotic Song|
| Aion K chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
The story was well written and was quite entertaining to read. The beginning was a little confusing until a clue was given as to whom was speaking and who they were looking at. (the fact that you mentioned 'daughter' was clue enough.) The piano music with the hypnotic effect on Haruhi was a nice touch as well. Overall well done.
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Aw! It's so cute! I love Tamaki when he plays piano! Two or so things... "I stood on my toes to get colder to him" should be closer XD colder to him... hmm... "IT" probably It... and when "he took my hand intertwining" there should be a comma after hand... I think. I agree you should get sick more often if it means you write more (but not seriously sick). Anyways, keep writing!
| White-blood chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Aw that's so cute (L)
I like haruxtama, and you did a great job!
| Lady Anja chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
this was a lovely story. haruhi and tamaki would admit their feelings like this. maybe haruhi would flail a bit more, and tamaki would be a bit more hyper. but with serious matters like this, i think they are both very loving.
thank you for a wonderful story! feel better!
| jsjdfsdfj chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Love it, Hel!
Viva TamakiXHaruhi! Lol