|Reviews for Consequences|
| nanami chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
it's beautiful, just like o.p...
it must be hard to create a poem to narrate everything in the right order...
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Not that bad, and not really that boring because it's a narration. Still, some parts are awkward.
| starlit skyes chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Just freaking great!
"As you dance in my rejoicing melody"
"Then the ripples came to change my being
A wolf emerged, volatile and seething
I cannot be with you but I knew in my heart
There’s nothing which could tear us apart
I broke my promise; hurt you again and again
I believed nothing can be done then
But you searched for me and made me see
You could love a monster that was me"
"When you left, all my hopes shattered behind you
Waiting for nothing to pick the heart you once sew
You loved me, but it was never enough"
"So I decide to believe in us still
Deep inside you love me; awaken it I will
You say you love him, I agree
You say he’s your whole life, I don’t set you free"
"And so now I knew I’d stake my claim
I have the love that no one can tame
I was your sun when absent were your senses
He came back but had to pay the consequences"
I know its irritating to quote! But I wanted you to know the lines I loved most. Really nice! ;D