Reviews for Edward's Little Slave
Detroit6 chapter 4 . 7/24/2014
lol big room you have .
ridetothemax chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
Update please!
Debbie White chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Love this story keep going.
Mrsarabellacullen chapter 5 . 7/9/2011
This story is getting interesting I hope you update soon.
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 5 . 5/6/2010
wow I like the story it is defrent
Gabby Gatsby chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
dun dun dun
RedAliceRed chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
hey cool story ]
BreGurl23 chapter 5 . 9/20/2009
hurry up with chapter 6 on edward's little slave !
ucanlookbutyacanttouch chapter 5 . 9/10/2009
I LOVE UR STORY! PLS PLS PLS WRITE MORE!

TTFN!
twilightfan818 chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
Hey! Yes its the same person that has the actual pen-name. I'm sorry but its been like... 4 monthes. Are you going to update? A lot of people really like this story.

Please update soon!

Also, I'm sorry I'm leaving another review but I'm just curious. Please update! :)
ConfusionPixie chapter 5 . 6/25/2009
write more!
pixietwilighterforever chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
plz update soon
minatilldawn chapter 5 . 4/26/2009
i kinda really like your story, so i hope you update soon
morganpetrovapendragon chapter 5 . 4/1/2009
kw
Team-Edward3849 chapter 3 . 3/17/2009
ok...what i have to say about your story is that the plot and everything is awesome! But...things you add in it, like the whole "loved to spend your DAD-TEE’S money all day *cough*Paris Hilton*cough*wow who said that? Back to the subject", "mighty hot in those underoo’s", " I am so overly cereal (although I prefer pop tarts!)" and etc...

It really ruins the story! Sorry to say..but yeah...if your going to keep it like this than you should change one of the genre's to 'Parody'!
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