Reviews for Papercut Skin
taeliwren hale chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
OMG this was hot... The sexiest thing I thnk I've ever read... I loved how you wrote Jazzy's character and I laughed my head off when I read about him reading about the Civil War, my immediate reaction was: "Dude, why are you reading about it? You were there when it happened..." Anyway, it's pretty late here so I'm gonna hit the hay. Good story - Tae
Turquoise Girl chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
That was awesome. My favorite part was:

"'Jasper? Bella, why are you calling out my brother’s name? I know he’s deviously handsome, and a much better lover than me, but why would you do such a thing?'"

*sighs* Jasper and Alice are so cute.

Lelouch le Britannia chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
that was hilarious at then end, when Jazzy was still in character and Alice started yelling at him -whipes tear away- good times good times
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
hèhè, indeed routine doesn't sounds that boring at all _
Potiphar chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Wowe! That was an awesome story. And you wrote it perfectly. Role-play an amazing idea. I may try that when i'm older.

-x- Betony -x-
Emeraldfires chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Very creative! And very naughty!
Lauren Wright chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
HAHAHA, brilliant! I loved it. :) Very creative.
suicides-in-the-blood chapter 1 . 12/22/2008

That was completely randem! BUT WOW!

That was hell awesome!

Very well written!

I like the idea of jasper and alice doing something like that.

its funny but hell kinky at the same time! haahah

next alice might want to try it like the wolves! lol!

demerolcastaway chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Aww I really loved this, so sweet and sexy and I just about died when I read that line about Ron and Hermione.
BellaTonks chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Oh, man this was freaking great. It's like we get an Alice/Jasper and Bella/Edward lemon all in one. Total genius and kind of funny too. :D
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
This was adorable, sexy, and funny all wrapped together. Loved it!
WolverinesRogue chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Whew! Hot story! Would have loved to see Edwards face when he smelled those two on Bella's mattress!
LollipopLove chapter 1 . 12/21/2008

You are a brilliant writer. I'm going to have to check out your other fics x_

I imagine it must have been confusing as all hell just trying to think this out.

Fave fave FAVE!
i luv tl chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
lol, omg that was good
jennierenn chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Oh my! That was fucking amazing! Great idea! I loved it.
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