|Reviews for Naruto Genkyouien|
| Saitama the Bald Eagle chapter 3 . 2/21
| TTRPG chapter 1 . 2/19
32 size bonus
| jomahal23 chapter 22 . 2/3
The Gabriel Blessing reference is strong in this chapter
| jackalope33 chapter 62 . 12/23/2016
very well done! amazing originality! words dont even describe the amusement i felt when reading this story (and the amount of time reading it). there's so many things to say i cant even put them into words xD
my favourite character is probably Yurimi- always brought me great amusement with her slave/master mindset. i wish she had more screen time
i love how you involved yourself to add humor but not too much as to basically write about yourself and how you managed to turn some of the greatest events of canon into a joke (exibit A: Sayuri chasing her tails..)
(i'm assuming) your creation of the power void, though extremely OP (i mean, you could literally do anything but eliminating the possibility of it not happening), you still kept it at a level where characters throw it around like candy and become mary sues (on an unrelated note, imagine if Sayuri had void instead of fire...)
personally i think there should be a sequel (cause there are some loose ends, like kushina appearing, the rest of akatsuki etc.) but with this last chapter (and the fact nothing has happened in almost 2 years) i doubt that's going to happen.
i'm pretty sure there were some other things i wanted to say, but i just cant remember them.
PS: this has got to be the most words ever written for a plot that lasted roughly 2-3 weeks...
PPS: early merry christmas
| Jelamy chapter 62 . 12/20/2016
WOAAAAA finally finished... longest story I've read so far and absolutely one of my favourites . Your grammar is amazing and as some parts can be confusing I understood in the future. I wish there's a sequel or something like that but honestly I'm just happy this story was finished ... huge thank and hope to see you write more Naruto ff in the future ..
| SemonDemon chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
Dude this is my 3rd time reading this story and i will say without any doubt that if you were to publish an actual book i would force force everyone i knew to buy it because you sir are just that awesincredunbelievably good at writing.
| deepwound78 chapter 14 . 11/17/2016
Thought it was gonna be good from all of the good reviews and likes. It wasn't. This is probably the worst depiction of Naruto I have ever had the misfortune to read about. So dumb he could be a literal brick wall, blind to the most obvious of things, and weaker than he had any right to be. While yes Naruto is obtuse about certain things, thick headed, and supremely stubborn, he is not dumb. He learned the Shadow Clone in a few hours tops, created a actual physical transformation Henge, and showed a brilliance that came to fighting bordering on genius, not to mention his mastery of the sage arts at 16, something Jiraya hadn't done in his decades as a sage. The idea was well executed, with OTHER interesting characters and stories for them. But in a Naruto centric story, Naruto has to be well written, else you lose readers when they want to break the protagonist's trachea and hope he chokes and dies on it. The Naruto in this story was spineless, being beaten down, yelled at and hurt to shut him up and supposedly teach him a lesson or leave him confused from supposed superior beings. When, if he had been well written, should have angered him beyond belief, making him shout about his own ideals and beliefs or whatever the person did to piss him off, and Setsuna would have been sent back within ten minutes of being summoned, since ya know that's a thing summoners can do that Naruto knows how to do from all of the tadpoles he summoned. So this is as far as I got before I gave up, so disgusted with this Naruto I actually threw my kindle as hard as I could at my couch, which it then proceeded to bounce off of and onto the floor.
| vianmeor chapter 61 . 11/12/2016
I really, really want to thank you for this - for everything.
This... this was an amazing piece. Overall, everywhere, altogether - no matter how I say it, I will say I loved it and loved it and loved it. My most heartfelt thanks for giving me something to appreciate and want to emulate in its emotion and sincerity.
| freddy.lane.1 chapter 30 . 11/7/2016
dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnn that was intense!
| freddy.lane.1 chapter 29 . 11/7/2016
is yuria seriously going to use her tails as drills!? hahaha! that is awesome!
| TheNineTailedNinja chapter 42 . 11/6/2016
What happens if naruto plants the seed?
| ExBlazE chapter 4 . 11/4/2016
Ch 4: Here's a cookie for you, for writing this awesome chapter.
| Xynovitch chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
I've probably read this story several times too many to count. There is something...something in this story that sent me back here over and over again. I don't know what it is but, the way you handled the supernatural genre of Naruto Fanfictions was probably one of the reasons. Also, you managed to make a story that doesn't end, I like that. My favorite character is Mayuri.
| Danmaku-OverLord chapter 62 . 10/31/2016
EPIC FIC! THERE MUST BE A SEQUEL! PLEASE, DO A SEQUEL OR REBOOT! THERE NEEDS TO HAVE LOOSE ENDS FIXED! ALSO PLEASE MAKE NARUTO AND SETSUNA RECONCILE!
| Kurai Kagayaku chapter 62 . 10/22/2016
I have been on this website since I was 12. Pushing 23, I believe that gives me some fair insight to the reality that I'm about to speak. In all my time, all the stories I've read, all the one offs and epics, I have never seen a more confusing, long winded, cluster fuck of a beautiful masterpiece. This is by far and away the best story I have ever seen on this or any other website. Never before have I been so happy, confused, overjoyed, teary eyed, and pissed off during a read through. It took me about a week to make it to the end, and by God what a week. Not only was you're grasp on the way people reacted to certain situations so spot on, your grasp on the end of all things astounded me. It wasn't a happy ending, not one bit, but it was DIFFERENT. It was NEW. I've seen so many tales that go good guy wins, bad guys lose, happily ever after, but this. This thrilled me. The way you signed off on this was so open for further interpretation, I simply can not make my opinion known. I have left reviews on maybe 12 stories, out of all the Naruto ones avaliable. This, like the truly handfuls before it, redefine what fanfiction is about. It's about the ludicrous, the asinine, the ridiculous. It's about taking what is and making it your own in a unique way, you sir, have gone above and beyond in that pursuit. To you, and those like you.