Reviews for Naruto Genkyouien
Guest chapter 62 . 4/15/2016
This is hands down one of the best fanfics ever. At least to me. Thank you so much for writing this!
Uzu chapter 7 . 4/12/2016
Dude...You say the 'Yuri' means Lily...Don't Lie to us...

'You mean 'Yuri' as in Lesbian...DON'T DENEY IT!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/12/2016
Oh god...the Inuendo...Let's just try not to make it. In-Your-End-Oh, okay?
Mumia0813 chapter 4 . 4/11/2016
I...have to stop here! I'm dieing of laughter this is the most cutest n humorous fic I've ever read...roflmao
Guest chapter 62 . 4/8/2016
dude this story is the best fan fiction story I've read, this is a masterpiece!.
I wish you owned naruto instead of kisimoto
MyNameIsLaura chapter 2 . 4/6/2016
This whole story is completely and utterly awesome. *wiggle wiggle*
Blood Of Odin chapter 62 . 4/4/2016
what more can one say than a lame I love this story?
Detinc chapter 62 . 3/29/2016
I just finished, in my personal opinion, the most BEAUTIFUL fanfiction I had ever read to date. I cried at the end. YOU, Daneel Rush, are a master of the written arts.
Neiiya chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
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After years of reading this (I've been trolling along Naruto fanfics for well over a decade now) I just realized one of the references you made and just.. wtf... I usually give long, detailed, and critical reviews on the pieces I think are exceptional but this one... just holy shit! School days... Kotonoha.. Bag..
SQUICK

Kudos. You invoked a lot of emotions in that realization, and even before that I believed your story had one of the best dialogue's in fanfiction. But with that realization, I don't think I can ever look at this piece the same again, as I used to in my pre-otaku days. Damnit!
Nowdied chapter 2 . 3/21/2016
"Yuri"...I see what you did their you magnificent, amazing writer XD.
Nowdied chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
A chibi young nine tails? That is adorable and new.
kewllewk chapter 62 . 3/17/2016
If I'm being honest, as a conclusion this chapter was horrible. It solved none of the conflicts presented in the story except when it briefly mentioned but glossed over several bits and pieces which I can only assume(and/or hope) will be properly explored in a sequel, but here only served as confusing bits of foreshadowing.

That being said, those things were obviously not the point of the chapter in the first place. The fight scene was ridiculously epic, the family bits had all the feels, almost everything important is proved to have been worked out eventually, and the final bits of worldbuilding fell into their place on this wonderful tapestry of fiction. I loved everything about this chapter, and I'm happy you did this instead of some pointless conclusion that skipped ahead and showed how everything turned out. You have my gratitude for taking seven years of your free time to write this story, and I can only hope you're not done with the setting yet.
vysirez chapter 14 . 3/14/2016
So I came across this story again. I have tried to read it in the past, and while I found it amusing, if a bit confusing, I couldn't finish it because of the way the relationship between Naruto and Yuria came about. The fact that Naruto had no choice in the matter, and Yuria claimed him just to attack her sister, with no real interest in him, it just poisoned the rest of the story for me. The first time through I tried to keep reading, but it just soured everything after that point. You tried to make her a sympathetic character after this, and if she had been the first one to run into him, I think it would have been fine. But the way it started just ruined it for me. Add in the way that Naruto just, effectively, shrugged and accepted it, made it worse. Yes, there was a fight about it in chapter 14, but after that he just decides it's all fine.

The other issue I had with the story was simply the fact that everyone's name starts Yu, makes it extremely difficult for me to keep track of who is who. I can understand the humor about the names, but you should have had them all move to nicknames after they were introduced, because it's very confusing, and it never really gets any better.
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 3/6/2016
Ch 6

Poor Naruto.

That is little awkward and very Funny. But really funny in some situations.
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
Ch 2

Sayuri Ninetails still talks like a tobler .

Almighty Tobler . It's interesting. Bye.
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