Reviews for Naruto Genkyouien
InTheYearOfTheCat chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Another great chapter, I love the whole mother/lover relationship thing you have going on. For a character like Naruto of course this would be a huge issue for him never knowing love or his parents. Can't wait for Sayuri's and Yurimi's chapter, and I guess I will suffer through Yuria's so we can finally get to the Chunnin exam. Keep up the great work.
Tray-lover2 chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Really enjoying this fic im checking for updates almost everyday.

Glad to see sayuri again she's the best character followed by naruto then yuria.

Naruto and sayuri are alot like koyomi and shinobu from makemonogatari.
The Engulfing Silence chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
This was nice, but so short, so short. All of your other chapters are like 17,000 words, and this was... well, not that.

Still, it was a good chapter. It didn't have quite the impact of the others, however. I think this was because there was only a bit of truly emotional interaction between Naruto and Kotonoha. They've more or less already bonded on a pretty deep level before this, so now all they are doing are admitting their feelings for each other...



God, that sounded so wrong considering who I am talking about.
Culaio chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
VERY interesting chapter :D, But I must say that I'm confused now about their relationship, naruto shown that in this fic that he loves her both as a mother and a woman, for example shown when she was in his dream(if I am not mistaken) :D.

Keep up the GREAT work XD.

for bad english
BlackRevenant chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
God dammit! This was awesome on so many levels man. You are a genius! A god even! I can't accurately express what I felt when I read this chapter, same with the previous (Yuriyo) and I think its the chapter before that (Maiyuri) so much emotion so much raw development I almost wish you cliche out and have Naruto become immortal the sheer level of awesome, lulz, drama, and potential is immense!

Once you finish all these sides you should release a second "story" or chapter (like a oneshot) with its entirety in order!

Ichimaru OvO chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Wohoo! Go Kotonoha!

Very inspiring chapter, it was well worth waiting for. The Kotonoha centric scenes were very emotional and fluffy, I loved them. The others were very much enjoyable too, nice balance of the sentimental parts and the comic relief in-between. Especially Yurimi's confession in front of the genin (and "Mistress"), I lol'ed for minutes at all of their reactions!

Or in Sayuri's words: Moar pwease! munya-munya
Liddle chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Wow. Um, so it's mother or lover? I'm confused...

Whose next? I want to see Yurimi's confession! Aaaaaa

Yeah, Kitsune's psychology already different than human, or most human... They live a very-very long time after all...
DoubleDynamic chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Once again, I was moved by this chapter. Keep it up, you're doing well.
Quathis chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
I was wondering just how Naruto felt towards Kotonoha and, while their relationship before seemed slotted firmly into parent/child, this chapter for the most part seemed intent on opening it further. Thought that last scene made it all fall into place. I got the feeling she wanted another child, though whether it would be Naruto or with him was debatable. Very touching on that last scene, and very good growth in Naruto's maturity and emotional state. Until next time.
FF8cerberus chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Damn! That last scene was really angsty. I have to admit I've been in a similar situation where I hated myself just like him for the way my body reacted to someone I saw as a precious person. I truly feel for Naruto in this one. Respect for him. Oh yeah, I was wondering has he actually slept with Setsuna or only had those extreme kissing sessions with her? And thanks for the update.
ahwhat chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
To be honest when that bathhouse scene started i kinda expected Naruto to confess about the thing he had with Setsuna.

All in all another great chapter.

By the way do you plan to release the chronologial order of scenes in an extra-chapter/story?
Zaralann chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
One of the best chapter EVER! I even cried at some point, you're one of the best authors here! Keep writing, never stop!
tekevil chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Yo! Long time reader and rarely reviewer

I've really enjoyed the fanfic so far, all of the characters have had a touch of realism that has made them highly endearing to me. Yeah Kotohona is pretty crazy, Setsuna is tsun tsun, Yurimi is foot in mouth sexual, and everyone else has their quarks, but they don't consume the fic or overshadow the characters layers, because they're like onions :).

Though cakes have layers too
Hecatonchir of Athena chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
I... I have no words. This chapter was incredible. Thank you, thank you for contributing this piece of literary greatness upon the world. You are a master of your trade.
god of all chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon
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