|Reviews for The Power of Five|
| fourwalls chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
OH shit, this was wow. I am hardcore RaiFuu. It's almost like a Romeo and Juliet pair.
| josephine chapter 4 . 7/5/2011
omg i loooveeeee this one..and i love raifuu..too bad its not that popular i guess?:(
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
I guess I shouldn't really credit you for the line. It didn't come from you anyway. My opinion is that, it's OK to use line for fics...but since the chapters are too short, I'm afraid not in this case. If the readers read your parting message, this chap will be like you didn't make it-you just typed it. I'm not convinced that it's a fic YOU wrote anymore.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
Again, the ...'s at the end. It's better put into one sentence. But the tone was quite good for me.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
I think you used too much "..." It doesn't add to the anticipation any longer. But I thought the premise was a cliche put into a better statement.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
I'm starting to think you should all merge these chapters into one-they're so short anyway. In my opinion, if I gave a review for this, it'll be like reviewing for a single statement in a fic.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I'm not exactly sure what to say. This is a risk for you. But generally, I think that you could have put this on a better way.
| Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 5 . 12/26/2008
| radcliffe-dreams chapter 4 . 12/23/2008
What can I say? What a gloomy fic for the Yuletide season. *sniffs*sniffs* If that ever happened to me, I'll be kicked in the ass by my bff...
Demo...Meri Kurisumasu minna-san. I agree that ToFuu rocks!
| Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Hm...actually Raiha is more emotional kind of guy and in manga...it's actually is obvios that he liked Fuuko...not Tokiya. Initially, I had seen anime...so wasn't really into pairin...but after anime I thought Raiha wud be suited, although he did go a wee bit insane in the end.
I'm a tofuu fan all thanks to yanagi-chyan...
God knows why I liked it...