|Reviews for The Christmas Present|
| EDWARDandemmettlover chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
i love it!
| sharpied chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
aw sweet story
i really liked it
| hi.michaelarocketmail.com chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
love it cant wait for more
| Grey's Lover 4ever chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
That was absolutely perfect. Wonderful job. That was so sweet. I am left speachless.
| hkcjphillips chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Wow. I'm actually one of the first to review! lol
That was something. :) I love sweet Edward!
| alaskangirl chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
ooh that was so ooh ok i am all mushy now that was damn sweet. sigh i cant wait for the update on love and duty!
| Lani chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Sweet, but one note:
Anxious means you dread or fear what's coming. The word you need is "eager," as in "eager to meet you." Eager means you are happy about what's coming.
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Love it. I love how she told him she was expecting.
| Girlz-Rule chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
| macb chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
that was good. Thanks for the Christmas Present! And Im very excited for the new Chapter of "Between Love and Duty". Thanks. Merry Christmas :D
| laurajaexo chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
aw that's real cute.
| asf134 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
WOW! that is a hell of a X-Mas!
| preetynpink123 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
that is perfect low grade kind of lemon not to graphic to make you gag but not like the doors close and a few seconds later they come and start talking or somthing.:D
| abigail-ann-cullen chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
wow! really good! so sweet!
| Rose in Bloom 01 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
aww that was so swwet i loved it. i like the fact that they had been trying for a year then finally they got kindof a Christmas miracle baby. :DD