Reviews for kann Liebe ewig?
MaidMaliya chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Du beherrscht die Grammatik bis auf n paar kleine Fehlerchen sehr gut! Deine Art zu schreiben ist sehr lustig *lach* Umgangssprache ist das auf keinen Fall. Es erinnert mich eher an eine Geschichte aus nem Schulbuch *kicher*. Verstehs aber bitte nicht falsch, okay? Die Stry ist echt süß!
zissy chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
omg.. man merkt auch nur ein ganz bisschen, dass das ned deine mother tounge ist

aber da es eine der 4 deutschen ffs hier ist.. musste man das wohl mal lesen.

and why shouldn't this story be here on ? do u think it's just for english writtn fanfics? omgomgmg, there are about 470 pages of german harry potter fanfics. so, WHY NOT?

well, anyways... pati, you really should search for a beta reader.. just for.. slang and.. some expressions which u really do not use in german language :)
LovelySesshy chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Das is voll cool! Schreibst du bald weiter? Ich hoffe ja, denn ihc liebe das Paar Kaname x Yuuki Also mach weiter please

GLG LovelySesshy
putt123 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Ok i seem to be the only person who understands this fic...well it would seem embrassing if i couldn't understand my mother tongue, wouldn't it? well it seem fun, but i think you have stopped updating didn't you? well if you still continue the story, i would say you may upload it on " ". It's the german side to this one, but as you aren't a native speaker you might have trouble, and of course one might notice your mistakes(well they are almost non-existent)...your decision

so this happens if you just look if there are german vk fics

well i'm gone now, but first i have to tell you that this was a nice piece of work

bye
Refrigerator-Burn chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
hahaha! WHAT! im sitting here laughing like, what the hell is this? WHY IS IT IN GERMAN! i dont get it! HELP ME! ...and you speak german? COOL!
deepcutfighter chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
WHAT LANUGUAGE IS THIS? ITS SO COOL! but i have NO idea what going on. . . :P