Reviews for Kel's Depression
MichelleWolf13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
I really loved this story because we really get to see the fatherly side of Raoul and sweeter side of Dom. Your writing is amazing and I really enjoyed it. Thanks. :)
Seliana 11 chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
It was pretty sweet. The fact that the Giantkiller was afriad of her and had to bury her weapons was kind of funny.
pottere1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2008

The hole plot was off. Kel was planning on breaking up with Cleon, before he told her that the engagement had been finalised, because she realised she did not feel the same way she once did.

However apart from the plot this story is amazing! Grammer, punctuation and spelling are impecable and is perfect in uses of adjectives, adverbs and things simler.

I enjoy reading you work and hope you Write more stories.

Happy Christmas

Ally-Marty chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
That was a nice one-shot. Please accept my condolences on the loss of your friend. Writing helps to ease the pain and you write very well. I hope you feel better soon. Peace, Ally-Marty