What a fun story, but hasn't been updated in years, such a shame. Darn I really hope you come back to it some day, it's pretty interesting. Thanks for the good read!

eh, this was good until this chapter, I was sad it wasn't finished. But then you pulled this shit to basically hamhandedly force the Uchiha shit back onto canon. Firstly, so SICA can scan ANYTHING through chakra barriers, etc., except for the plant guy. Magically, he's completely undetectable, even when he's standing there in a room? Bullshit.

Secondly, Naruto, who has been learning all sorts of shit, doesn't know who Madara Uchiha is? It's basic frigging village history! If he knows who the Hokages are, he knows who Madara is! That was ridiculous.

Thirdly, the bullshit of Madara deciding to just openly pop in, free all the Uchiha, destroy the ANBU HQ, then openly march around the village like this goes directly against EVERY SINGLE action he's taken over the years! He secretly released Kyuubi so no one but Minato and Kushina knew of his interference and they're dead.

He secretly controlled Yagura to cause the bloodline war in Mist. He isn't even openly the leader of Atkatsuki! There's zero frigging chance he'd act so blatantly, so openly, just for a handful of Uchiha assholes.

Naruto Uzumaki equals Havelock Vetinari!

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Awesome Naruto fic that is not harem crap or focused on Sasuke/Sakura. Pity the writer stopped. Very gripping fic.

old favourite

Is there a reason that some authors go through the trouble of saving the uchiha only to have them killed anyway? Makes the whole situation a waste of time.

Umm… how about “That’s none of your fucking business. I’m the Hokage so sit your wrinkled asses down”

Why does everyone make Hiruzen so weak willed? “I’m giving you a chance to explain”?! Tf is gonna happen if he doesn’t? They can’t veto him, it’s a military dictatorship! Hiruzen can do wtf he wants!

Oh my! Looks like SICA is in dire need of a memory upgrade. But given the enormity of its own database already, I'm not surprised. Scanning and recording EVERYTHING physically possible within a 1 mile total diameter is INSANE, honestly.

This is one of the best fanfics I’ve read. Very entertaining. I hope you continue with it.

This arc has been the best work till now. I especially loved "You know what you should do Koharu." Nice to know that she didn't get of the hook.

You might be thinking that I have been flaming you in my earlier reviews but that has not been the case. I don't flame as it is a pointless exercise. I read the fic and liked it (otherwise I wouldn't bother with reviewing) but there were certain shortcomings which is what my earlier reviews were alleging to.

Although you probably don't really care as the fic has been abandoned.

Some of the earlier flaws were corrected in this chapter, like Naruto being able to be sensed when hidden, Naruto's age being shown through his naivety. Although one major flaw is still prominent and that is Naruto being able to listen in on council meeting even with people knowing that he can be sensed through chakra sensing and The eye being missing in action.

During the land of wave mission Inari was 8-9 years old and he was present during Kaiza's execution on his feet and was traumatized by the events. So he would have to be around 5-6 years old then. This makes it so that Gato took over Wave when Naruto was 9-10 years old himself. Considering Naruto is 8 in your fic at the moment, Gato's wave takeover is a year or 2 into the future. But this is a fiction and when Gato took over Wave has little relevance. So write away.

I forgot to mention Danzo as well. With more than 100 clones with radius of 1 mile doing recon 24x7 throughout the village, the area covered would be more than many modern day metropolises. As walls are not an issue with SICA and Danzo's hideouts while underground are definitely not more than mile deep, Naruto would have come across recordings of Danzo's various activities as well during that time.