lol people on here love to say that any story they are reading is the best lol when in reality the story they are reading just sucks.
they happen to be possible bored with themselves and life. i mean why else would they be interested in something so horrible

if one secret (minato's son) cannot be revealed, then kyubbi secret also cannot be revealed.
Always take one secret, but not another one for glorifying the old incompetent hokage (not for suppressing his boyfriend danzo, uchiha or hyuga matters, sannin matters)

Fun fic, reminded me of one called 'Outfoxed'. Sad it died but this is a definite must read.

This seems like a forced plot to have the Uchiha tragedy still happen. I mean really, you are saying 1: zetsu was able to hide from a highly advanced piece of technology that is from a universe spanning civilization that has encountered possibly thousands of different species, and said technology has also showed abilities to sense energy even from the kyuubi inside of Naruto in a seal? 2: you are saying that the ninjas were able to have a conversation multiple times, break out of their cells, defeat every enemy around them, then make it through the village, and then enter the Uchiha compound and start attacking them, before this highly advanced technology with a powerful mile wide sensor was able to sense it and send the signal? And 3: you are saying Naruto who was trained until he "supposedly" could match jonins just barely, wouldn't be able to react quickly enough to send out clones to notify people or get there and help himself?

Really was enjoying this story, good writing and a plot that was pulling me in. Sad to see it stop here.

Please come back and update this, you have created gold

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this is the first fic I've surprisingly come across of this genre and I got to say I'm impressed! it hasn't been touched in 8 years or so but I hope you come back and continue it! has been a great read and one of my favorites in my foray into Naruto fics

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What a fun story, but hasn't been updated in years, such a shame. Darn I really hope you come back to it some day, it's pretty interesting. Thanks for the good read!

eh, this was good until this chapter, I was sad it wasn't finished. But then you pulled this shit to basically hamhandedly force the Uchiha shit back onto canon. Firstly, so SICA can scan ANYTHING through chakra barriers, etc., except for the plant guy. Magically, he's completely undetectable, even when he's standing there in a room? Bullshit.

Secondly, Naruto, who has been learning all sorts of shit, doesn't know who Madara Uchiha is? It's basic frigging village history! If he knows who the Hokages are, he knows who Madara is! That was ridiculous.

Thirdly, the bullshit of Madara deciding to just openly pop in, free all the Uchiha, destroy the ANBU HQ, then openly march around the village like this goes directly against EVERY SINGLE action he's taken over the years! He secretly released Kyuubi so no one but Minato and Kushina knew of his interference and they're dead.

He secretly controlled Yagura to cause the bloodline war in Mist. He isn't even openly the leader of Atkatsuki! There's zero frigging chance he'd act so blatantly, so openly, just for a handful of Uchiha assholes.

Naruto Uzumaki equals Havelock Vetinari!

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Awesome Naruto fic that is not harem crap or focused on Sasuke/Sakura. Pity the writer stopped. Very gripping fic.