Hi Jade,

It's nice to be vindicated, isn't it!

I'm going to be honest with you, I don't think the battle was overpowered, considering what Agito felt when he summoned the armour of the One over the Senalzar home world. It was everything I had hoped for, and it's ironic that Sho utilised some of the techniques he did against Alkanphel against his best friend with the same effect. As Imakarum said, Sho always walked away from a battle.

The way you dealt with the powered Guyvers in Yisuvac's creation was very informative as well, and I really enjoyed how events unfolded thereafter. I wonder how Agito will feel when he acknowledges Sho as the One, that will be interesting to say the least!

I've read this chapter five times already and I plan to re-read the entire fiction in light of this chapter.

A final note, I wonder what will happen to Tsuyosa's unit, now that the host is no more.

Thanks very much for the best chapter in the entire story, and I'm hoping gou won't make us wait a full month for the next chapter!

Regards,

WolverineIK1973

That was an epic battle. It was overpowered but it felt right. I'd wish for you to continue this to the universes end but you have this set so I can't complain. It's been a phenomenal read thus far and can't wait for the end of the story. Keep up the great work Jade

AW! At last you did it!
The battle was great and I loved he moment with Sho's realisation, that sun shouldn't bow to his will - it was rightful sense.
Though, I feel sorry for Tsuyosa (I can't help to myself) .

Once again - thanks for writing!
P.S. oh yes, image of TWO white guyvers now is eating my brains ;)

Hi, Jade Tatsu!
I made quick pic of the One, though I'm not sure, if I got right idea about his design .
I hope, you don't mind that i have drawn him... but If you mind, then I will delete it from the gallery ;)

art/The-One-391402972

Sorry, I wanted to sent link via PM, but it blocks the links...
Or maybe it's just silly me .

Oh the irony just -oozes-...

Tsuyosa outright dismisses Sho as a possible One because he saw him fight with Imakarum.
Natsuki pretty much guessed (her Unit "confirmed it"), but she kept quiet.
Aptom and his Unit's apparent "loyalty" to the One
The "3 strikes/you're out" diplomacy method from the future is clearly something Sho would go for.
The Units practically telling Tsuyosa he's building his own nightmare
That "pyramid" - oh that just begs...

Tsuyosa only wants to give the Guyvers more independence - I actually agree with the concept, but it looks as history is about to repeat itself... Meh - I need to reread earlier chapters - can't remember if you ever the circumstances when Tsuyosa "first" became a Guyver in the future. I still have a pet theory about Tsuyosa and Sho, but I'm keeping a lid on it for now (not enough evidence yet).

You do have a habit of throwing plot curve balls though (which is fun), so I'm withholding judgement and await the next part. :)

i am starting to think that Shō's is the emperor but only uses the power rarely to stop wars and such and at the same time the fake emperor (zoalord) is the one going around doing that dark deeds that makes the Tekki leader think the emperor is a mistake. making it so the tekki are trying to stop the wrong emperor XD plz pm me if i am close, any way nice chapter plz update asap :P

Thank you for update!
It was very interesting and amazing chapter
I especially love Sho's revelation, that he actually doesn't have a Gigantic :) This, and his last grab on free to call Unit - it was amazing, really
For Tekki's part - it kinda sad and ironic that he has put soo much effort in creating the future he tried to avoid so much .

And yes, once again - I feel sorry for poor Tetsuro...

Hi Jade, thanks for the chapter. I'll admit, while it doesn't have what you said you would put earlier, I.e the GuyEmperor's identity, I can see why you wrote this chapter to set it up for the next.

I just hope that you get the next chapter up and running in the next few days, honestly the suspense is just killing me!

Wolverine IK1973

Amazing chapter :)
Thank you for quick update.

The thing that amused me more than anything else - is that Natsuki has figured out the personality of the One faster than anyone else ;)

And Aptom's bits of information about the One, as well as his plan, are very tasty cookies

P.S. Now, I think, I understand why Tetsuro will never forgive Tekki...

Hi there Jade, I've been looking forward to this chapter for a while now and I'm not disappointed at all. The lengths that Tsyosa will go to in his quest to destroy the One are frightening indeed, and it's not easy to see him as a human who believes they are doing what they think is necessary.

As for Sho and the gang, I am more than convinced now that he is the One. The conversation in Interlude I has never left my mind since it happened, and the fact that his unit needs time to rest and grow, as it puts it, means to me that it is finalizing its form into the armour of the One. IT can do this now that Sho has acquired the amalgamated Zoalord crystal from Masaki, which I think was the final piece of the puzzle.

Your writing style has always impressed me, and I'm going to check out your other stories as well.

Next chapter: The identity of the One is finally revealed to the Universe, and the Tekki finally has the opportunity for tend to his secondary goal...

I don't usually review but I do feel compelled to express a bit of gratitude for writing such an entertaining epic for one of my original anime series. I've never actually read the manga but I grew up watching Guyver on VHS back in a day when the selection was limited to Ranma and Tekkaman Blade.

In particular I feel rather appreciative of the fact you brought a touch of grimdark reality into a series that eventually degraded into a series of DBZ style powerups. Really I just enjoy the story as a whole since well written fanfiction for the anime series I grew up with are going rarer with each year.

Amazing, how twisted this story. I mean, Alkanphel with his last wish/order actually pushed the events into the direction of Guyver Emperor's creation...

P.S. Sorry, for my English

That was an interesting end to the fight. I hope to see more soon.

Hi Jade,

It's WolverineIK1973 here, and I LOVED this chapter! It was still heartening to see the Terran Guyvers go all out in their defense of Merrimu, as well as seeing what Mizuki was truly capable of. Also, Aptom being confirmed as the One's Giga Guyver Warrior is not terribly surprising. After all, he is one of the most efficient, brutal and vicious warriors in this fan-fiction, it would only be natural for the One to wnat that power on his side.

It was also good to see the re-emergence of Masaki, Sho was right when he said that this is how Murakami would have wanted it. The interaction between Sho and his unit was also very illuminating, it reinforces my belief that Sho is the One.

Despite Tsyosa's memories, I do believe that Sho is the One, as he is the only human Guyver not aligned to any GuyLord that has the power to be the One. Furthermore, the yearning his unit has for Imakarum's main Zoacrystal suggests that maybe the armour of the One needs this component before it can fully harness the power of the universe, as Tsyosa so elequently put it during his confrontation with Mizuki.

All in all, an awesome chapter; although I half expect to be proved wrong on the identity of the One, it will still be interesting to see exactly when the GuyEmperor will make his first full appearence in the story.

Keep up the good work, and please, if you can, tell me the identity of the One!

Regards,

WolverineIK1973

awesome chapter, I am guessing that the zoacrystal in Masaki's body is used to create the one XD plz update asap can't wait until the next update