That was great, when is the next update?

This is the best fanfic I have seen. I hope to see more soon!

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This is a very good story which is long but some of the symbal

is very eye catching and sometimes making it hard to read

but i do hope the nxt chapter comes soon though

Just love the characters and the story! Easily one of the best Guyver fics out there. I can not wait for the next chapter.

Your fic is very good.. I've been reading it for a while now. I've read a lot of the other Guyver fics but i enjoy reading yours the most.

nice work, I especially enjoyed the interactions between sho and his unit. However sometimes you use the the wrong word such as 'what' instead of 'that' and you will sometimes use the wrong tense, but I understood what you were trying to get across.

Good story, hopefully you'll have quicker updates and some real plot progression in the next chapter, we're getting all Star Trek here. I thought this was a Guyver fic?

Great job, I love it.

Nice chapter, wellwritten I'm stil tracking this story daily hehe.

But do hurry on the next chapter I can't believe you left us hanging on the tournament :p

Bloody amazing, it's slowed down a little from the crazy start of the story, but I get the sense what your building up for will b worth the wait. Oh yeah and speaking of waiting, plenty of that going round waiting for these chapters eh?

hi

i just want to ask you why have you took Possession of it no longer opens

Rachel

I'm back, and I see there are a few more chapters than when I stopped reading. I'm very happy about that.

Great job

Oh yes..I am ebil .! Muahahaha! I gots that fight log by the way Jade! *Waves it round wildly, grinnin* And as per usual, the chapter was superb...especially how Sho's unit seems to enjoy and finds amusement in annoying Agito xD Always plus that is! Gwahaha! Keep it up!