Reviews for The Conquered
greatbear chapter 15 . 6/8/2003
Yes, a new part.

Woo Hoo.
J chapter 14 . 4/29/2003
I like every everything about this story.

Keep up the good work.
Xenriel chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
I'm sorry I didn't review this earlier. Awesome fic.
Earthshocker chapter 12 . 4/11/2003
One of the best guyver fics I have read. Lots of nice plot twists and I'm dying to find out what is going to happen next. I hope you update soon.
Omega Devin chapter 13 . 3/25/2003
Wow, I can't believe no one's updated this yet. Oh vell, I shalt pave the way. It's cool that you got the POVs of all three of the major extraterrestrial characters, and their veiws on the Terrans and the power they carry with them. Fear, maybe a new sense of respect, but above anything else, definately fear. Great interlude; can't wait to get back to the story!
Omega Devin chapter 12 . 2/22/2003
Wow, this story has more twists and turns than a riverbend. But only to make it all the better! Great plot developments, and I like the depths you're reaching with the characters. I also like the upgrades that you're making for the Guyvers, and the different classifications (alright, so it's been in the story for a while, I'm a little slow). Anyway, good work, and I anxiously await for the next installment!
Vejita The Eyceman chapter 12 . 2/19/2003
Hey this is a good story. I've read the whole thing so far. And I can't help but guess that Sho is a GuyLord or possibly the supreme being, he has alot of power that has yet been tapped into. I can't wait to read the rest. Feel free to email me. Keep up the good work.

Javiere
greatbear chapter 12 . 2/11/2003
This story is still great.

And is very similar in story context to the original manga.
Sunder the Gold chapter 12 . 2/1/2003
A rollercoaster ride of new developments, and even more previous assumptions overturned. And yet, it is not crowding the story with too much.

On the other hand, I feel that the back-and-forth developments surrounding the GuyWarrior Guard Alkard is somewhat rushed. Sho's killed, Aptom transforms into a Second Stage GuyWarrior with previously unknown powers, Mizuki ascends into a GuyLord Healer, they pass the life of the hapless guard between them (and then with Sho's Unit and then with Sho) like a hacky-sack, then let him live, then defend him, then evolve him, then accept him as one of their own.

Also, it seems as though the grammatical quality of this fic has dropped further. Not so much that it cannot be understood and enjoyed, but enough that a perfectionist English-major like me cringes.

Still, I await more.
Tazman1 chapter 12 . 1/27/2003
I like how the story is turning out, still many unanswered questions. Just the way it should be. I look forward to the bext.

I have my own story, very different. I was wondering if you would be interested in giving it a read and comment on it.
Sunder the Gold chapter 10 . 1/26/2003
Sorry, hit the Enter key by accident. I wasn't done.

What I might have done was call the Advents, "Uranus," as they are in some version of the series I'm unsure about. Especially since Agito set up a whole Greek Pantheon, it would seem clearer to us all if Uranus (the Titan of the Sky) was replaced by Chronos (who I believe took Uranus's wife and his own mother, _Gaia_, Titan of the _Earth_, as his wife) replaced by Zeus, as in Greek mythology.

This entire thing, while good, also needs the benefits of Spelling and Grammar Check.

All in all, though your story is often depressing, it is a wonderful piece of work. Not many pieces will have me up at 4:00am in the morning, still reading in the desire to know more.
Sunder the Gold chapter 11 . 1/26/2003
Excellent character portrayal, interaction, and development.

Believable flow of events.

Truly unique ideas about the Guyver Units - from the different types to their distribution (and likely, origin) beyond the Advents.
Omega Devin chapter 11 . 1/19/2003
Yup, that was about two and a half minutes _ Great chapter, very intense. Let's just hope that Sho's little deminstration was enough to give the Advents something to chew on before performing a little stunt like that again. But, then again, if you didn't have persistant (or stoopid) antagonists, then where would the damn story be? Looking forward for the rest, as always! Peace out! (Let's just hope the Terrans can find some of that along the way) x_x
aeroprime chapter 11 . 1/11/2003
Very good! The structure of the chapter is better then the earlier ones. I love whats happened so far.

P.S. Sorry about the email thing. My Email acount has gone screwy on me. I let you know when its back up.

-aeroprime
greatbear chapter 11 . 1/11/2003
To Jade Tatsu,

Great story.

It really lived up to the original manga series.

Post more and many will read.
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